I didnt post it for crits man haha, i know its a piece of shit and the letters and fill are wank, you know how late it is here in england. Just posted it to put a flick on the page .

 

if you didn't post for crits, then why bother posting here at all?
and yes ditch the crazy fills til you understand your letters.
I also don't like you.

 

yes i do sledge im from london, it being late is no excuse. i wasnt attacking ur peice, so dont feel the need to defend ur skills. just follow the crits okay

 

i say make youre E a lil more visible. its like cut off. other than that pretty good. i dont rlle like all the extensions between the letters. thats just me tho.

 

chalk- no simples yet, octopus is finished, and will hit it up later

got so much shit for the toy battle, i decided to work my style a bit and came up with this for the up and coming battle, goin to be in the advanced to make everyone happy
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iight so delete your post sledge, can someone ELSE give me some advise please

 

i never bump my own stuff, so im thinkin i can get away with this. and bump for seyar, really feelin that

 

sledge i like the style on ur As but the fill confuses the lettering

 

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your just a bunch of toys who have never touched a can of paint, who no one cares about.

 

since your cool borg i help ya out. i would have crit(ed?) you before i just got swept up in the argument. i would have to say that both the S and the R are dope. im lovin every single bit of them. truthfully i think that all of your letters are good but i would have to say that the H and the E are your weaker letters. i guess i would say that the way you made the S and the R are very similar. i guess just mess w/ the H and E to try and make it fit the other letters. other than that the coloring is ill as always and yeah that pretty much it.

sorry i skipped ya before.

 

Borg my advice would be to make the lines on the S and E cut in like they do on the H and R. But anyways good colouring job should win it all the little fags always vote for colour.

 

i guess dont attach all the letters like that. it looks strange. also dont use the W to make the top of the E. thats all i can think of at the moment.

and to sweeten the pot for borg...

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yeah. pretty much i i can do.

edit: sledge... why dont you let chalk choose the one he wants polled? if im correct he doesnt even like that recent one...

 

do this to

 

Personally, I think that skill wise you are both the same...you both paint, and both of you guys have decent letters...and Chalk is insane at stenciling.

But, if you do wanna battle, be my guest...but don't ask a toy mod to post the battle because it will probably be good enough for the "real" battle thread.

 

scare it looks alright but thats fucked up how u did it, it makes it kinda hard to see the letters

borg - looks dope man, id just say redo the sketch a coupla times or something cuz u got lotsa time for the battle, that way your final one will be off the sheezy

gumdrop/eske/ whatever - go simpler man, just let your hand flow too, it looks shakey

sledgehammer and chalk battling should be dope

meh some random boredom, tuned up the other sketch you could say. crits? sorry bout the shiity camera phone flick
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rayse i like the style but the S and the E are a lil bigger than the rest. the colors work well tho.

 

umm would you guys be mad if i said i dont wanna go simplier?

 

i wouldnt be mad because frankly its your graffiti, not mine, so its no biggie to me i just want to help you get better. its just right now your stuff looks so forced and all well poor structured. Even though i go like crazier sometimes, i still rock stylish simples quite a bit, i find them fun to do and they look decent, they look ill painted. u will understand why simples are essential in around six months time, you will look back and think what the hell was i thinking.look at chalk for example, his letters are simple, just bent and slanted and stuff, just do things like that you dont have to go to like super blocks.