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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. IlikePie

    IlikePie Elite Member

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    Ehh, just cut it out 'cuz I had nothing better to do.
    Scare2-Keep doing those simples, it's nice, but I think the loop on the R goes too low
     
  2. Phobia-oner

    Phobia-oner Member

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    thanks man, still working on it.
     
  3. Fluffy Bunnies

    Fluffy Bunnies Elite Member

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    damn hell no!
    I understand ur trying to do something hard but try not to get to ahead of urself!
     
  4. garbage down tha way

    garbage down tha way Elite Member

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    just finished. saving it on jpeg made it all smudgy and fucked up but oh well.


    Scare- pore looks cool just cut off all the parts sticking off the letters.

    pie- i like the r, but the rest is pretty wack.
     
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  5. esko

    esko Member

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    garbage - whys the n orange?

    ai19.tinypic.com_520q1dy.gif

    trying to come up with a new throwie for tonight
     
  6. RaydBGK

    RaydBGK Member

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    Esko - I like everything but the E, the bottom limb doesnt come out enough imo.. makes it kind of look like aretarded kids face.

    Garbage - the A doesn't somehow fit the rest of the flow. It's bent to the left, the M is neutral but ONG is bent to the right.

    Scare2 - Pore looks tight, only thing I would change is maybe make the loop on the P bigger to match the R. Dilate looks nice.
     
  7. esko

    esko Member

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    thanks rayd, i thought the same thing after looking at it lol

    this ones better, flows better

    ai18.tinypic.com_4qrh8h1.jpg
     
  8. RaydBGK

    RaydBGK Member

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    I don't like that hump on the bottom limb. Other than that, definitely better.
     
  9. amk

    amk Elite Member

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  10. Drakula

    Drakula Elite Member

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    Gonna add a character to fill the gap.Does it flow better this time?

    the flow goes like this:

    DR AK
    \\ //

    Not really feeling your handstyle AMK,or the character but I put that to the byro.Byro isn't the best for sketching(I don't know how bouncing soul did it).I like your new sketches though just keep it up.

    I like it Garbage.Just keep the outline on the outside of the letter don't make it go inside.The letters look good but work on the middle bar of the G.

    ILIKEPIE,I can see what you're trying to do but it's not quite working.Do some more simpler stuff,not bars but something a bit simpler than what you're doing now.Come back to the style after that,i can see the potential.
     
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  11. Gumdrop.Behemoth

    Gumdrop.Behemoth Senior Member

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    twisting my promise alittlle im only gonna post exchange picture
    quick pen freestyle for seyar exchange messed up the s and the r
    ai79.photobucket.com_albums_j138_AIRGEE2302_IMG00176.jpg
     
  12. amk

    amk Elite Member

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    No beef Gumdrop..but you have to ordasity to call me toy...bleh..

    thanks Drak..i think your going to far with this shit...maybe tone it down...and change up your letters..like seriously
     
  13. REAL..

    REAL.. Member

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    bump...

    never bump my own work but i got nothin wonderin if i cud get some crits :)
     
  14. uhhh

    uhhh Elite Member

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    honestly,
    your handys pretty wack.
    but it seems like it could get good with time.
    so you definietly could keep going with that if you want.
     
  15. amk

    amk Elite Member

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    hehe..my handys always been whack..iuts basically my letter form in peice incopred into the handy..hehe..aha..thanks babe uuh :)

    Bemoth...whatever man...

    Real...nice colouring i spose...bad bahhhhad leters tho..tone it waaaay down..like thos TDG simples on the last page or sumthing
     
  16. uhhh

    uhhh Elite Member

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    maybe thats the problem?
    when you look at your pieces its really clear how they came from basic letters,
    but looking at your handy it doesnt look like that.
    it looks like you just kind of, came up with it, and it didnt really develop from anything.
     
  17. garbage down tha way

    garbage down tha way Elite Member

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    The whole thing pink would get sooo boring. haha. i dunno really.


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    amk- i just drew this up real quick, you could go off it if you want. im not too good at handies but it might help a little. peace.
     
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  18. RaydBGK

    RaydBGK Member

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    The way I developed my handstyle was I just wrote my tag over and over again really fast and sloppy. You notice little nuances in your handwriting from there, and you develop extensions and flow from that.
     
  19. Blackeyed_Pea

    Blackeyed_Pea Senior Member

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    Very nice real, just make the L bigger all around and repost it i wanna see how it looks.
     
  20. DankNC

    DankNC Guest

    ai75.photobucket.com_albums_i296_Monkeyking5791_quapthrowie_2.jpg

    sketch battle entry, crits?