might wanna mess with the n it's a little close and makes it look like an m

 

i agree trichome...also it needs more flow..and don't put any addons til you've got a solid style...

 

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its good man, but not diggin' the R too much and the S is kinda sketchy but all together good job. add a lil' flow.

 

roolete i like it
i hate my "m" most of all

 

forreal? uh that sorta sucks considering we're in the same damn state, what part of VA is hamilton? any picture by any chance i just sorta wanna see it, thanks bro i appreciate it.

 

He means the Hamilton in Canada. Don't worry about it if your in the states, my man.

Any crits? It's pretty basic, actually...

 

he means hamilton,ontario,canada.. just outside of toronto

 

you B is wayyy out of place...but i dig the other letters...theres just something about that M(me likeeyyy)

 

Yeah, my marker went thin on me (probably the way I held it) for the "B".

Cool that your digging the rest of it though . I'll work on my "B" tomorrow.

 

FRAT drop the quotations in the K

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crits?

 

crits...


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crits pleasee

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bump....maybe you people should start giving crits instead of just asking for them

 

BUMP

 

Dusk - I dont like the bottom and top under-overline things, other than that it's nice, especially your S

Esko - the E looks a little out of place, but im diggin the fatty letters

Caffine - it looks excessively sloppy to me

Abyss - the letters look too plain to me, try stylizing them a bit more.

 

caffine - try using a lower case f, i think thatd look better

 

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tips?

 

Snail - I like 2 and 4 the most. connecting the lowercase a to the n just looks strange.