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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. -GuEs-

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  2. Mr Tasty

    Mr Tasty Banned

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    soof just give up...u never take anyones advice...go SIMPLE...
    stop wasting time coloring in...ur letters are horrible...the 3d is wrong
     
  3. AteskOne

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  4. The_Sheep

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    Ok am I the only person who thinks this kid should drop extensions alltogether? Seriously Im not trying to be a dick but the extensions have looked like absolute crap throughout. I think whats happening here is Drak is so focused on extensions that the letters still look like shit, Im sorry but they do, you just started man, at your level extensions should not even be something you attempt yet especially the amount you use in your same tired piece. Instead of filling space and making the piece look nice by bending your letters correctly and making the letters flow you draw some crappy letters and then fill the space with awkward extensions, stop. Work on your letters, work on your flow, and experiment more, your just starting, why not experiment with different styles other than the same DRAK piece with the same style over and over and over, seriously theres a drak piece on nearly every page man and i cant even tell them apart sometimes, do some other letters, evolve your letters, then do extensions, you have potential but your getting way ahead of yourself, slow down, graff takes patience. Peace man hope this helps.
     
  5. -ShAmEE-

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  6. Sumoe

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    Looks a bit like mine, also. It's decent though, you still have to work out proportions, though.
     
  7. exhale

    exhale Senior Member

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    shamee - the 3d on it doesn't look right?
    drak - the addons don't really seem to fit in. theres a swirly park, then a arrow
    atesk - maybe not cirve the top bit on the s so much? i donoo

    something on a early morning. tips/crits?
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  8. -ShAmEE-

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    use that negavetive space up.
     
  9. 'lacsittinlow

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  10. hungr

    hungr Senior Member

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    drak yer D is a crisp S ...u should drops it!!
     
  11. ODonthesetrees

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    i actually disagree, i think his letters are tight but the extensions do have to go, im not trying to be a douche but im almost positive ive seen all those letters before which is why they look so tight...usually you can pull off a decent extension when you know how to rock letters nice like that
     
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  13. ODonthesetrees

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    i too am realising that thread sucks

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  14. c.n.k

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  15. rushoner

    rushoner Senior Member

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    ok...i understand where i fucked up the 3-d..but as far as letter structure? how am i doing in that category? i wanna advance my style and ive been lookin at peices..im used to throwies and tags so. help would be wonderful
     
  16. ODonthesetrees

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    your letter structure is wack as shit to be honest, it needs to be bars and where they connect should make a notch like bars would in reality...it shouldnt be a curved point

    THIS is letter structure:
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    ai47.photobucket.com_albums_f182_rogan181_page1.jpg
    ai47.photobucket.com_albums_f182_rogan181_1181810zr3.jpg
    ai47.photobucket.com_albums_f182_rogan181_DSCF5470.jpg
    ai47.photobucket.com_albums_f182_rogan181_DSCF5472.jpg
    none of that is mine so dont be a retard and say wow thats great, everyone knows its great
     
  17. rushoner

    rushoner Senior Member

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    thanx for the letterstructure chart...ill be working on structure and 3d alot til i get better.
     
  18. ODonthesetrees

    ODonthesetrees Elite Member

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    haha its not a chart but youre welcome
     
  19. neukr

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  20. rushoner

    rushoner Senior Member

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    OD...you mind helping me? like exchanging with a style i can somewhat bite but also add shit to to make it myne in some sort of way? i really really really wanna get into piecing but its killin me! my heads gonna explode in like 2 hours if i keep goin.lol