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i suck i know..
comments please...
i know that my pens are cheap..i paid 2$ for 12

 

Move to hawaii. legal at 13 if I remember.

Anyway, more, i'd say that the no-hole look just isn't working that well. sorry man, it looks kinda unfinished.

 

thats coz it aint finished man ahah i gotta put in the peice heheheh ..13 damn..

peace.

RFI...i aint callng yah out..but iv never seen your shit..could you post some or summet ?

 

Dont like the O but that R is sick

 

just got new markers
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Jers likin the 3-D but not such a fan of the letter structure might wanna go simpler just a lil
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crits?

 

Jers, it looks like you kinda got flow, but not the structure. work on that and it'll be tight.

Sinn, it'd be better with brighter colors, but maybe that's just me.

I found a [crappy] camera so I finally got to take some flicks.

letters were just fucking around-
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bunk, but a good five minutes nonetheless:
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and the faces, which are really fucking hard to draw in crayon:
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jers, dont like them letters much, need more definition



this thread sucks of late. allow me to contribute the same old shit.

 

the S needs a little work but other than that its all good

 

the E and S in res look tight

 

this is a current piece im workin on. been sketchin for about a little over a year now and im just wonderin if im ready to go out and paint

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i'd say to work on flow more, and when you paint, do some chill spots first to make sure you can control the can.

exhale, i don't think anyone really gives a shit anymore if it's a bite unless the guy's really trying to pass himself off as the original artist. Post crits man.

 

captain - good faces but the letters need work

amdre - pretty good but wokr on flow, tery and make it a bit smoother, not neccesarily your letters, although they need to be smoother in my eyes, by the peice in general looks kinda jagged

pear - ill, but your R seems a lil smaller just kida throws the peice of a bit

i could use some crits before i ink this, and what can i do to fill up the space between the Y and A

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seyar thats def dope...try addin a 3d..maybe the gap wont look so empty then

 

yeah but how do i get flow? i still dont understand. and the names amore

 

this is what being lazy does to you guys....



i think i started this one a few days ago and i just got to the A.. im one lazy little sexy bitch..

 

make all the letters lean one way/make a bar repetitive in each letter, check the new to graff thread, amk did a decent tutorial on flow. just try to keep a bar repetitive throughout the letter.

baze i think the super long extension of of the B through the A kills it, that a alone is pretty nice tho

 

sryar where the 07 is change that to 20 then put 07 in the space

 

http://www.vandalsquad.com//graffitiView.php?id=1542860&returnpage=archiveView

uuuuuuughhhh

first try at digi shit... wack



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