amk- thats really cool- dont really like the rabbit in there tho, doesnt really match the style of the rest of it, bt maybe yoo had yoor own reason to insert that. w/e. dope

kase- not feelin it, dont really hav a lot to say, keep workin on it

real- dope, maybe less extensions


workin on a new name, i jst cant stand my g, and my e isnt that great either. so im gonna start writin sank or rank.
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rank- the R the N and the K all flow but work on ur A

 

Someone on this forum already write sank i believe

but good nonetheless

 

emel- the N is a lil wack but the fill is dope as fuck

 

I like the throwie Rank more than the sank.keep rank and change your sig.

 

cheers for the crits everyone im glad its better than last time and yeh im new to that style and it needs practice and toning down but i think its improving... what does everyone think about no extensions at the bottom i think that would look better...?? cheers again peace oh and whoever did the lrg and nike thing looking fresh theres a nice style there...

 

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yes... the k is somewhat inspired by geks k. ive been having trouble witht that letter. im not sure about my T.

crits....
GEKS i think i like the S more than the R. in other words i mean go with sank not rank.
amk i like it all except for the last letter. no matter what i do i cant figure out what it is. is it an O? is it a W? what is it?
kase get rid of the nose on the k and get rid of the elephant trunk on the A other thank that its good.
ninja if thats supposed to say s8en then its good. pretty clean.

edit: and i do see that the bottom leg on the k is too skinny.

 

Vice- Look at the thickness of your bars, look at your T, then look at your K, see the difference? The K looks anorexic, so does the A bar, redo it with consistent thickness and try see if that looks better

Geks- You have the right idea, just keep going, but the thing is you need to make your shit look cleaner, to do this simply trace your piece but real dark and use clean strokes instead of small short choppy ones

Amk- Like the background and all, real clean but i think its time you wrote something other than your own name

Real- To me it seems overdone, like a really well done ugly piece? Idk looks a bit grimey for my tastes but others like it so its good, not one of those pieces i can crit since theres not much wrong with it, its just not for me i guess

 

throwbacks.




and just for enjoyment here's a dolphin hugging a teddy bear.

 

Really digging i'd like to see a some colaa

 

I'd make the vertical bar on the h a little shorter or maybe make the T a little taller. anyways, I like it.

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actually amkah! you still owe me an exchange from like back mad months ago

 

oh shit...my bad...:O :O :O ... umm ... ill do you a magethon one to say sorry ahaha..shit i completkey forgot...

Thisone...i was thinking..the round T dont flow..then you went and changed it..wierd...did you e-read my mind..shits dope man.. !

 

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Brain Deadizzle
Mers
2007


Cyto on the last one dont make the letters all match up exactly, take the lil wiggly bit off the T and make the Y's wiggly bit go the other way 2 make it look like a Y!

 

i´m just beginnig its my second day writing but any critiques are good

 

Bastardo you belong in the big boys thread man.

This, I love your username!And it's a dope sketch aswell.All I can say is improve the right leg of the H a little more,lose the curly bit so it fits in more.And don't put that line of the S through the I,it just looks odd.

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Aaaaarrrghh my K doesn't fit in.

 

try un guess who Vote For This One is...

nice Drak...i think the R is abit wee too tall tho...and the K bottom bars dont really floooow....iono...still aigghhtttttt

 

quit hatin on the H, its dope the way it is
if the the straight piece was bigger, it would look fucked.
it has mad flow the way it is