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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. trim

    trim Member

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    mers- mad fresh lovin the throws wanna exchange? i write cris
    drak- great flow in ur letters
    this- make every letter about the same hight and width and it will look better
     
  2. Bazer

    Bazer Moderator

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    nice but how about some 3d on the period? :)

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    the end.........? lol... i gotta do a few things to it still..
     
  3. sex without condoms

    sex without condoms Elite Member

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    the E seems a little too skinny compared to the B A and Z
     
  4. SAEK

    SAEK Member

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    drak the k looks smaller than all the letters to me
     
  5. sex without condoms

    sex without condoms Elite Member

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  6. Chulo

    Chulo Senior Member

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  7. Captain

    Captain Senior Member

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    been fucking long enough since you were here man, that shit's blazin.

    chulo-don't sketch the shit, do complete lines.

    I've got my doubts about that saying jhis, so the thing to remember with t's is not to put an extension there if it's gonna look like a 'j'. And it usually does. t's are a bitch. otherwise it's kinda cool.

    drak, try something for me, use fewer extensions, and try and flow everything from the basic letters to the little addons and

    raytone, start fresh and checkout the new to graff thread. and don't bite anything from there, we'll notice.

    cyto, do more like the bottom one, and less like 'risk'

    war, work more on bar flow, see the line comment to chulo, and i'd suggest a name change (every sixth grader that's into graff thinks of 'war' at sometime) but do what you want.

    NEW SIG!!!!
     
  8. raytone

    raytone New Member

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    captain thats damn good u write very good
     
  9. emel

    emel Senior Member

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    drak.... dude listen to what people have been saying, do a different style, lost all those arrows and extensions, your doing the same thing over and over stop doing that it pisses me off
    its like posting the same thing every 5 hours and changing one or two small parts of your letters.seriously!
     
  10. Chalk

    Chalk Senior Member

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    for a skate park i'll be painting. quick sketch of maybe some simples. i am have spacing issues, might bust out my tracing paper later to space it out better. over alli feel OK. about it...
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    bastardo - sick miss seeing your stuff.

    chulo - not bad. stick with straight bars before you go and bend them. concentrate on keeping your bars all the same witdh with clean straight lines.

    Sex WC - your K and E don't look like themselves...

    Baze. - lookin like fire. though that fork extension on the top left side of your B has gotta go.

    Drak - i would say lose the arrows. for now. push your letters closer together, and open your D a little more.

    Raytone - simples, plain and simple

    Cyto - please resize your images. and your I isn't really flowing with your letters. extend the top and bottom to make it more tradional might help it out a bit.

    Vote. me likey. A lot. ink and color it please.
     
  11. moer

    moer Member

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  12. South-Pole

    South-Pole Elite Member

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    ^Read my sig before posting anything in this thread

    Bastardo-Fuck,sick as usual
    Baze-I'd like to see it finished lol.
    Drak-I liek it but your K looks a bit like an H and slow down with the arrows
    Vote-Looks good,just change the smiley on the dot of the i

    here goes...havent sketch'd in 2 months or 3,,,well heres my last sketch that i done 2 or 3 months ago,,i just started sketching yesterday and still trying to go further w.e just wants some crits,,oh and yes there wasn't enough space for the whole piece on the paper like always

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  13. amk

    amk Elite Member

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    Trn...sick manh....ahahha...your sig...LOL...ugh the peice...maybe lose the arrows....but if you like it do them..i aint feeelen the lil indents on the letters but thats me..overaall letters looks purfect..

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    crits..? lol..
     
  14. MaNtS

    MaNtS Senior Member

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    nice pr0n ha ha

    hmm maybe space the legs of the W out a tad at the top, so theyre not connecting, cause they could be mistaken for a very weirdly shaped o, :S anyways dope. keep it up :)
     
  15. amk

    amk Elite Member

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    shit...wheres the posts at...thanks mants..

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    yeuh....filled peice....just the doodads to finish off now.
    toned the fill down alot too.
     
  16. The_Sheep

    The_Sheep Senior Member

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    South Pole- Bars is too thick cuz, starve em a bit, and it might just be me but 1/3 of the image is cut off? strange sig btw

    Amk- Glad to see the colors aint too crazy, lookin good though, looks like an epic coloring project ahead of you

    Anyway, its 4:00 am and i just finished a quick sketch and would like some crits on it from everyone:
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    peace
     
  17. -ShAmEE-

    -ShAmEE- Elite Member

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    sheepster! love ur style exchange?

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  18. sketch3

    sketch3 Banned

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    thats dope shamr, uv improved loads.
    only crit i can give is straighten ur N out, it looks abit wonky,

    sheep love it, id put a nice fat ouline on it tho, personal prefrence.

    amk nice to see a calm fill from you i allways like a simple fill, but thats me .
    its dope but wats with all the LRG ???? stay up

    chalk i luv the simpel style u got, but i think the F go;s into the L way to much.ill none the less

    drack i love the new D R A iwould defently devolp that style, be sure to devolp the K asawell

    bastardo-fucking dope asallways.ur shits bless

    so im not picless, just sum freestlyed simples....

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  19. ninja_303_763

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    yo this shit is fresh!! i would do alot more and throw some thin shine and 3d on it.
     
  20. near

    near Senior Member

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    diggas im lovin that style throw some 3d on that!

    amk in the most un-beefing way possible, ive been holding it back for awhile but, you think you are better than you really are...you obviously have some drawing skills as can be told by the background on your sketches but i think if instead of spending all this time colouring backgrounds on sketches you just dropped letters and developed them you'd be further along (graff-wise) one particular instance of this is i remember a month or so back you had a sketch with a character on the right that got posted about 20 different times instead of making new sketches and it was nothing special at all...once again im not beefing and i realise you are young and have mad time/room to improve, im just merely stating what i see and my suggestions...take it or leave it...