werd thanks man i dont understand what u mean by the charac thing but explain in pm's if you want cause were taking up space.. i like pie yah i know i thotit was close enough so i just said it was haha sheep serious props on that diggas
[Broken External Image]:http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/7955/southpolehelpmj7.png Shot at 2007-07-24 south pole here is wat i would do: where the green boxes are= chomp the extentions away uneeded ur letters have no direction and ur arrows arent showing any where the red boex is on the R u have skinnny bars not to bad but where i made blue boxes should be the same as they too are a cross bar. onto the red arrows; on the T you need to lengthen down to stay similar size to the other letters arrows on the R the top part the R wich looks like a its bottom bar is set to a different drection to the bottom right bar, to fix this move the bottom right hand cross and down bar little further down and let the cross bar not touch but run parrelel then. um sounds alot but its little thing realy some one on the other page said do a different style DONT no point in running from style to style just get this one down and ur on a decent road.
no worries i cant miss post like that emel i dont take that as beef since its crits no hate,,and for saying that i had the same style since the last time i was on bs is cause i made that sketch about 2 or 3 months ago when i was on bs.So im just posting some work i never posted before k..and yes the bars are thick i know,i'll try to make the thickest ones shorter and i'll get rid of those useless arrows Dream Creation,i understand what you say,this crit was quite useful,,i'll try that tomorrow or when i'll sketch.
whahappen - i love that amk - im not really feeling those ugly extensions, [Broken External Image]:http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/5376/152ty8.jpg Shot at 2007-07-24
great atec...good starting out with basic lettering thats the first step...now stick to the basics and your style should develop, just keep on with the whole pen and paper bit.
atec- i like the color fill but the letters are a lil wack, they all flow pretty good together but lose the smoke in the backround its to much, it wud be better wit jus an outline, the E is pretty dope
atec - the top of your T looks like it's about to fall off... just some outlines so far for the skate park piece. it will read FLAT ST. all on the same line not like i have it shown here. way better than my simples for it i did earlier IMO
yeah im liking it much more. plus its obviously your style so it will be recognizable as yours. edit: heres a pic of my newly updated throw. [Broken External Image]:http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y88/chickenguy12/DSC00423.jpg changed the T and worked on the K
Moer- Too much going on with that o man, i know os are simple looking and its natural to try and make it look fancy but leave the os alone for now, and your r needs work as well, try moving the curved bar more out Chalk- I think you overdo it with the bending alot but i guess thats your style, the s is kind of bad though maybe tone it down? Vice- Your s looks like a fat guy, its all droopy and weird, look at a normal s and try to imitate that more, your overall s's are always egg shaped, and i dont know why you changed the t, your last t was fine, its like you change something for the better, but also change something for the worse, just leave the good things and work on the bad things, namely the s, the k is looking better but still work on it, also dont color in the spaces with black it throws it off bleh didnt come out the way i wanted but ill post it anyway: [Broken External Image]:http://img470.imageshack.us/img470/4557/dsc00132xg3.jpg Says Esham, crits? peace -Removed Outline Edit: Found this drawing of aesop that i drew a while back, figured id post it [Broken External Image]:http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/6651/dsc00126pt2.jpg
chalk i like those except the L doesnt seem pushed together enough and looks a bit funky riski lost the arrows and work on those I's but nice start that "read" is dope i just think the D is a bit big for the other letters if it says "tis???? i can only read the S, start over. stak, looks ilke you ened to use bars homie esham i like that style i would just seperate some letters a tiny bit I been tryni to get a bombbbbb down since i watched piece by piece last night *one of the best graff movies out there i think* check it out on google i really like this N but i want the S to fit the style, any suggestions/ crits? [Broken External Image]:http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/613/scan0001ah0.jpg Shot at 2007-07-24
shoulda outlined thisbitch thicker.... wtvr sheep- im a fan emel- i can only make out the s whcih isnt to bad chalk- look not o bad i unno something about the letters dont flow ** edit im aware the fill is outside the lines it was intentional**
emel you should really use a a dark color for your outlines. that grey isn't workin for me. capo - i'm having a hard time seeing your letters. and what did you say about mine? i cannot decrypt that at all. sheep - how do you suggest i tone down my letters? and oh what color can do. almost hides the shitty 3d a quick and bad photoshop to see it on the wall...
Honestly, if you made that second one a bit cleaner, and tweaked the 'a' some, I think it'd look better. capo, you can always go back and line it thicker. moer, make your bars more consistant for now mate.
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