chalk im not really into ur bent letters the h kinda looks too bent up. i like the splat and the color scheme is sick tho so overall its v nice on the eye. Baze thats a sick (mini)piece (is it hit up on 2 stickers?) u should hit that up on a nice big piece of white paper or even a wall! Whynot? i dont really like the top one as youve just gone in without thinking about the width n height of ur letters. i thought simples were when u drew SIMPLE letters out of bars like those on ur keyboard??? the third one looks horrible too way too much going on with not much thought put into keeping the main parts of the letters visible. Heres a little quickie i knocked up really trying to keep width of letters and height around the same. Crits VERY much appreciated : [Broken External Image]:http://img104.imageshack.us/img104/4836/task2gy2.jpg
task-the letters are real nice, the only thing thats bothers me is the drips idk why tho haha keep it up quick, 20 min. thing i just did. thinkin of doin a name change, meb, mebr,mebs? idk but blah here it is anyways. [Broken External Image]:http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/2209/mebvi4.jpg crits please
chalk ur piece is sic, well i think lol mesa ur style is nice but i just dont like the connected letters personally task ur throw is clean jus get rid of the drips on the left seyar id like ur peice more if u outlined it.
[Broken External Image]:http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j204/drapes112000/graffiti042.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j204/drapes112000/graffiti043.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j204/drapes112000/graffiti044.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j204/drapes112000/graffiti045.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j204/drapes112000/graffiti047.jpg Some stuff i did over tha weekend. raysone that is good stuff like the colors. Jers good as always. I know that everyones gonna say to go back to simples but i was just playing around with stuff. Any tips that could make them look better though would be much appreciated.
[Broken External Image]:http://img413.imageshack.us/img413/8427/nerm20ce0.jpgpen freestyle crits.... task it looks ok bisedes the k and work on the handie
Fin-looks good man really clean i like that. Task-That's pretty good.Try to make your letters a little closer there is to much space between em.But, overall it looks tight.
Popshots, I suggest tking off the angular arrows they are not doing anything to support your letters. And now for some of my crap... [Broken External Image]:http://img67.imageshack.us/img67/5031/scan0002ju7.jpg
for the better. trying to bring my shitty throws up to par again. in this last throw i did something weird and put the V inside a E. i thought it was kinda neat.
for my Gf during a hard time [Broken External Image]:http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/3421/img0179dt7.jpg Shot with Canon EOS DIGITAL REBEL XT at 2007-08-01 Eack [Broken External Image]:http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/9945/img0180ek9.jpg Shot with Canon EOS DIGITAL REBEL XT at 2007-08-01
heres my round robin peice just thought i post it for crits since it hasnt been polled yet [Broken External Image]:http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/7379/img006le5.jpg
amuin gcs- that okizoo peace is dope as fuck love the fill drop those random red extensions. blood and money nice simple letters i like what ya did with the outline lose the extensions and you probably got my vote. kovr- illin as always. Eack- go simpler man i see potential you just gotta progress and not jump in head over heels. you feel me?
bump for love. amuin i like ur style, and uve got ur inking down solid. i might suggest thinner bylines tho.
Bloodandmoney- it all flows really nicely until the O. Just a little out of place, other than that, looks great to me Well I'm new here, just recently got into graff dunno what to write so here's my gf name.