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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.

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  1. Fube

    Fube Elite Member

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    sezer your handy is so ill, got such a natural flow to it. steez.
     
  2. kosher

    kosher Senior Member

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    diostah, i don't know which one is yours. i don't care for either of them too much. if it's the one with the drips i like the control of the dripps but still not the tag itself.

    senone, i really like the 2nd "e", the rest is definately on it's way though. keep practising. i suggest maybe trying putting the second "e" in sen and seeing how it looks.

    slomo, sorry not feeling it. keep trying though.

    alive, i really like em. great style with the tags and the throwies. wish i could develop a style like that.

    cosnail, i'd say if you're in love with those, go for 2, and try to work with it a lot more. but if you're not in love with them, try other stuff too.

    captain, i like the bottom one. letters have pretty good style.

    fube, i like the letters but you added in way too much eye candy. keeping it simple always works best.

    sez, always love to see your stuff. nothing bad to say.

    new name i'm thinking of, "mayjer". done in highlighter with very quick and sloppy pen outline and shadow. crits please.

    ai181.photobucket.com_albums_x293_kosheruno_scan0001_1.jpg
     
  3. PROMO

    PROMO Senior Member

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    Kosher, its ok but work on the "a", it looks too much like a d

    change your a and it would look better
     
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  4. Roolete

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  5. repsSDN

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  6. FIN one

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  7. Slushi

    Slushi Banned

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    separate your letters and make your Y simpler
     
  8. capitol

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  10. Roolete

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  11. raveone

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  12. inkbits

    inkbits Senior Member

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    It's real busy Rave, I wouldn't say it's bad cause it somehow has some appeal to me that I can't put my finger on, but ya can't read it man.

    the mildstyled new skatee cause not much else handstyle to post.
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  13. Ravid

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    thats dope a funk ink, loving rolete,o manythings rave clan it up a bit and make it readable and it would bedope. statik the s is to ou of place make it more like the rest of the tag. such as sarpe edges not so much with the round.

    heres a marker getting better but any crits?
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  14. inkbits

    inkbits Senior Member

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    If thats a chisel point use it only in the horizontal position man and will look a lot better. ie. all wide lines going downward and all thin lines side to side.

    bit wack but gives the point...

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  15. Ravid

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    o yeah but letters and everything ok?
     
  16. Captain

    Captain Senior Member

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    ravid, make the a simple. literally like it looks onscreen. don't flare stuff out as much, and make the letters flow into each other. don't force it, for awhile it's gonna look like normal handwriting, but it'll get pretty soon. [look at that 'mild style on ink's skateboard, nothing too crazy going on with the letters, but the way it's been developed is sick.]

    inkbits, nothing to say, I think you're out of my league.

    fin, simple it out a little bit

    cham, if that 's a g, just define it a little more. nice paint though.

    drained sharpie highlighter, refilled with india ink, best paper-tagging-marker ever.
    quick little shit so I'm not pictureless.

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  17. Ravid

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    thanks alot man ill get workin on it.
     
  18. kosher

    kosher Senior Member

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    roolette, i like it
    repsSDN, the top one is alright
    static, work on your style. don't like the lines on top and below, makes it look boxy. not liking that.
    FIN one, the bottom one is pretty cool.
    capitol, they're too faint. i can't read them. use darker paint.
    cham, keep trying.
    raveone, kinda cool but it's too busy. try to make it simpler.
    inkbits i really like the skateboard, that's cool. also chisel point is nice.
    ravid, keep working on it. needs improvement.
    captain, it's looking pretty cool.

    this is my first tag with my new name. i write "mayjer". crits please.

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  19. Cham

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    Ravid: id try to connect the a
    Rave: that is dope....I can't read philly styles but that looks sick man
    Captain: your handstyle is clean dope. and its suposed to be a s not a g. solk
    Kosher:I think you can make your m and y more defined. may seems like its kind of squished, but you connect nicely. I really like the jer that j is fire mayne.

    other shots from today
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    my other shot didn't come out cause it was dark and my cell phone sucks ill get that tomorrow
     
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  20. South-Pole

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