I'm sorry, is that third letter an a? Really clean and flowy, i just can't tell what letter that is. Maybe it's just me.
casa its realllly tight. and thats an O captain. it says swoe the o is much improved. amok keep ur bars same width throughout and dont do the squigly things on em. also blend all ur bars together so its a letter not a bunch of seperate bars. got lots of potential though. dont go more complex. ayte i reallly like the t and the e. their fresh as hell. the other two letters are less so. work on em.but its improving fast.
amok, i always like purple and green, nice colors, but cut off the bottom right leg of your k, dont make it have that thing that goes up. and do something different with it. make it a bit thicker too. and also take off the thing extending from the left of your A. thats just my opinion on it though. do what you please mate. [Broken External Image]:http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/erapebattle.jpg for that battle.
sume i like that shit and yeh ive been on a bit of a slump recently but the S is just too big but i love the E...
AMOK- It aite I spose but lose all those lil flicks on the letters and dont let the 3D overlap the letterss. OHNODONTLOOK- Back to simples dude.. And just concentrate on ya letters.. No fills.. RAPE- Great name.. haha... Lose that lil bump and just practice the throwie over and over and over.. Meh you get the drift.,. Trying my hand at some Euro shiiizlelllele... [Broken External Image]:http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/8350/dsc00094br0.jpg The lil bump on the bottom left.. I redid in Photoshop so whats it like without the fill??/ [Broken External Image]:http://img14.imgspot.com/u/07/216/15/Untitled1.jpg
^ grimey. in the bad way. heres a new sticker, with a new style. [Broken External Image]:http://aycu34.webshots.com/image/22833/2002531104817814911_rs.jpg just "re"
ohnodontlook- go to simples amok-dope stuff sec-nice throwie but y dont like the fill this is my 100 block leter piece do ya think y showld complicate more???? crits please
the R is nice idk about the E.. i think its a lowercase E .. not feeling the top extension. maybe try a capitol E or fix the extension.. its too crazy, i didnt know it was an E at first >_<
casa: that's sick as hell sume: that's pretty crazy i wanna see how it looks inked up you gonna? ohnodontlook: you have way too much going on... just my opinion... try to tone it down a bit and focus on the letters like fish said rape: good shit man but what's up with taht bubble and the E on the left? other than that i like it sec: the throwie is good but i agree the fill kinda throws it off a bit uhhh: that's pretty dope but i agree throw an upper case E in there and it'd be better i think sacwacko: not feelin the arrows on the first one but the second one is fresh i like it first try at a throwie... i know i messed up the shading... =/ lol but other than that... what u think? alive chill bro, this is why this is the toy section... we're just trying to figure stuff out and see what works and what doesnt but i do respect the criticism you give... and that one post you got deleted telling me i took the meaning away from the bars helped me so it's all good no harm done w/ that
you simply have no clue what euro style is. stop posing, and work on your fucking letters. why does every kid starting screw with colors n shit so much. GRAFFITI IS LETTERS. GRAFFITI IS NOT COLORS. sec, its a decent, however extremely generic throwy. throwies are where u get to have a bit more fun. keep playing with it, remembering to repeat the shape of each letter. it is not however, at all, euro, far from it. sky, dont fucking do 3d. focus on the letter and the letters alone. move them in closer, so they touch, and overlap slightly, then keep playing with it.
amok-ur going somwhere. better pics now [Broken External Image]:http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/Untitled2-4.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/Untitled1-6.jpg crits
Sac- Dont use arrows. Uhh- MUCH better. Even though i cant read it, But the ones you cant read are the best
amok - fix the k sec - too many colors dude sacwacko - the one with the character is dope says "riot"... [Broken External Image]:http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/267/13012tp9.jpg
sec not badd change the colour uhhh i like it a lot sac dont use arrows yet jers does it saw biot? new sketch for my boys shitty reak throw for my friend jah