Reap- if you lost the arrow on the r (arrow look pretty out of place with that style)and just changed it to be more like the other extension it would be a pretty decent letter. you're a and p look very awkward in that piece, they are missing the flow, and you're e is to skinny in some places. I like the effect on the letters though, maybe a little over the top but nothing wrong with that. tagkc- asides from your letters which im sure everyone is telling you to work on, look up 3d vanishing points and work on your 3d. ayte- digging your letters, kick the bottom of your y to the right a little bit though. just something im working on and some random trash [Broken External Image]:http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/2632/003ig8.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/8772/004eo5.jpg
samp - ill shit, i like them teeth too, he must use crest white strips sou - dopppe throws ayte - looks good simple but stylish nasr- best u did, just keep working on it im too tired to critt was talking to amk bout extensions, and this came out haha, result of pencil and boredom, and helicopters, i tihkn some work but some are fucked lol crits? [Broken External Image]:http://img379.imageshack.us/img379/4266/lastscanfn3.jpg
raysone: looks really good. The K is kindof funky you might want to simplify it a bit. I like what you did with the Y tho. Y is a hard letter.
cnk - i think the 2nd one is the best. sou - love that 2nd pic a whole lot also esp. that pink and black one. been a while since i have drawn anything. eh letters. goopy slime. crappy coloring oh my!
C.N.K. - ey yo shit iz sick homie. stay up CHALK - im feelin tha extras on ur piece (bubbles etc.) ey crits on this plz. fo sho
^^^ teach me? chalk looks perty good ray.. i can see how he got the k you shoulda pushed every thing up cuz it whole rite on the R is lowwer then the rest an get rid of the part that makes it look like a k and well itl look perty dope EDIT: GOD FUCKIN DAMMIT I HATE THIS SHIT WHEN IM THE FIRST ON A NEW PAGE!!
Nem digging the multi colour inline, just work on those letters, try straighting some of them out, it's quite difficult to pull off a proper bubble throw without really solid structure. chalk loving the bubbles, but your l looks a little wide. Drop a second purple splash background behind it and it would look even hotter. [Broken External Image]:http://img470.imageshack.us/img470/4107/006vs9.jpg this is it for tonight, im tired =\
damn! i already entered the battle. unless i can pump out one more soon. i can see it! asma right? its really sick man. i cant wait for some crazy ink on that thing. you should try a symmetrical kinda style sometime.
what have i done.... [Broken External Image]:http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/colors6.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/colors5.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/colors4.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/colors3.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/colors2.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/colors.jpg i have no idea...
nem-nice throwie speak1er-nice but i think you should do a little more simple sex without condoms-dope shit man Sou - Mvd-dope
honestly it gets worse and worse with every picture, and just ends up ugly as fuck. the colors dont work, the throwies wack, and what are the multi colored balls? and why are you doing loose cross hatching with a marker?
sou-mvd- real nice man. some color would be tight speaker1- nice shit. well hers nothin. [Broken External Image]:http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m50/ninja_303_763/scan-1.jpg
naw man. i realize its ridiculous. if you want the story. my lady was over and we smoked out of her brothers bong. chilled. she left. it was like 3 in the morning and i was watching this show on crop circles. and it was fascinating as hell. so i tried to draw one. and then thought it would be a sweet background for a piece. but then realized i cant piece. so i tried a throw on it. fucked it. tried to make it cool. fucked it worse and worse. and had this hilarious thing at the end. heh.
mvd- feelin the style i dig the abstract shit looks alittle busy now but it should show better with an outline n some color nem- letters need work bubbles just buggin me out spk- i like it, little structure missin in "p" (think its a p) but the style pulls it off wellk it def shows ur lookin at the overall piece n not just letters dans-clean... ackers- work on structure little style in tryin ta develope....