yeah jers that shit is nice but id loose the arrow on the bottom of the s. naysayer-eh im not feelin any portion of that piece roplete- id say the last one is the best ur throwie should be quick and thats the one that looks like it was quick and easy to day ight new shit got tired of doin bars so im trying some shit out crits [Broken External Image]:http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/6046/38797064il1.jpg
Chalk: i like your stuff dude, great color and 3d but the right side of the C looks like its starting to mold into a G. the K looks like it's coming along better though. bump but it'll probly get lost at the bottom again lol
scoot- not feelin that at all it looks really bad... try to get everything the same size and work some better bars chalk- i'm diggin that shit bro especially the background the A is a lil small though jers- i'm feelin that pretty nice flow... just the part on the E on the top of it where it flicks back up idk about that i think it's look better w/o but idk just my opinion akshun- the C and the E are the only ones i like try and make the other letters flow a little better crits please = ) i got bored...
and i dont get the comment really ^^ is that negative or just funny? chalk amazing as usuall. Drak. i really dont like that piece. did u even do that?? cuz ur way above that. CRN do simples. dont extend ur letters. dont add anything to them just do the letters. fills and 3D dont even matter right now. alive i see em different uhh.... how to explain.. the right of the top cross on YOUR J looks like the Crossbar of his A. in the upper center of the whole piece. like his simple version he posted. and i think thers a B and an E in there but its hard. i personally really like it. NaySayer- its not working. go simple and streghten em all out. none of the structure is working. if u havent check the new to graff thread. Jers its good but the top right of ur E gets too thin i think. and the bottom right arrow coming off the S is whack. for a quick one tho its siick. you have a reallly nice style. Aksun- that R is deffenitely not working. the hole is huge and it makes all the bars around it too thin. the rest has potentiall but honesttly i think bars would still help it out. but i know what u mean by it gets repetitive. Glas like i said before the S is fire. the bits arent working tho. amok. go simple dude. the bits dont work and niether do the extensions you need more solid letter form before you get complicated id also work on the Handy. one thing that does work tho. is the central body structure of ur K. minus the extensions and bits that K would be rocking. is this wild working or should i hold off on wilds for a little more.
you shundlt be colouring at all. and you sure as hell aint ready for wildstyle lmaooooooooo. dude. tone that shit all the way down. didnt you read what alive wrote ?. god damn.
Amok that looks pretty tight i like the colors Glas that looks allright but fix your G a bit, it;s a nice simple Jers looks tight,Dase need to go simpler if you ask me something i made last night crits?? [Broken External Image]:http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/5578/1002168eb7.jpg
Looks alot like sky5's style,just go simple and loose all those arrows,extensions and colouring ey Cougar-Don't try to move on so fast give it some time a shit load of pics [Broken External Image]:http://aycu40.webshots.com/image/25199/2000116641438731361_rs.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://aycu26.webshots.com/image/26185/2000134853215514788_rs.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://aycu35.webshots.com/image/22554/2000104211235613546_rs.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://aycu37.webshots.com/image/24876/2000105547632772469_rs.jpg Got more, Some catalogue that i sketched on, [Broken External Image]:http://aycu03.webshots.com/image/22402/2000631645744327886_rs.jpg Aa [Broken External Image]:http://aycu21.webshots.com/image/27020/2000664401790707634_rs.jpg ahem crits? oh and star1-Use bars man
star- use bars seriously. that structure is weak just do basic blocks for a bit southpole-fix the e in the top one. and the others are just ok. i like the a though its dope ight trying out some shit. CRITS POR FAVOR
akshun...looks decent...don't really like the N though...I like the extensions on the C and E but I think you should make the YLN fit in with a bit more flow... Recent sketches....crits? Second one is with ma bro Cyde [Broken External Image]:http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/8508/birthdayboyqc8.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/3815/collabofinalnb4am5.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/3072/penshizzlell6.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/5873/ufo1jj0.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/6589/rokitpenflowal4.jpg
thats beautiful poepom, you should move over to the other blackbooks thread. its wierd, ur a "senior" member but ive never seen ur shit. can i be that annoying twit for once and asked what you used for the outline and byline of the first sketch?
akshun- it needs some work but its iight. poepomhoog- dope work man, keep it up. [Broken External Image]:http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m50/ninja_303_763/scan0004.jpg
ninja work on your 3d if ur gonna do 3d on the bottom draw all ur lines down and then connect them. if u want em on the side then draw ur lines horizontally straight then connect as far a s letters not bad u should keep working on em though maybe do a few straight letters and thats my 2 cents. o thanx for the crits.
akshun-i thinm maybe try something different with the extension on the C. I see a g when i look at it. and fix the N. poepom- SICK heres a mspaint version of my last post. [Broken External Image]:http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/5952/stereodigitalsy1.png critz? i know its definetely clean. =P
wait, why the fuck cant he have diagonal 3d? lol. but seriously learn your fucking letters first. thats what matters. drop the bullshit 3d, color, and effects until you have dope letters.
poepomhoog1-wow dope shit really like the colors star do simples dude heres something i did for a battle on the mindgen forum CRITS PLEASE
Sky i think thats one of ur best things yet. tone down the coloring. if ur gonna do fills do em solid and maybe an outline. good P and i like the way you made the structure of the R similar. top of the T changes thickness and the bottom leg of the R is too thin. its pretty good tho. keep at it. yeah akshun diagonal 3D is perfectly alright?? as long as its uniform. Ninja i Reallly like your F. the rest could use some work tho. Robot. i really like the first one and the charachters are all nice. allright so i finished my first attempt at wildstyle in a while. should i keep with the simpler stuff or run with this for a while. and is the fill overkill?? ignore the wack handstyels.