Minor crimes: go easy on the addons. Go back to block letters
Dark: Lose the arrows. and the 3d should never go all the way to the vanishing point, it looks ugly, cut them off little before.

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Crits?

 

didnt get any crits bump =]

dead- i think you should use your own advice but in reverse its to plain fattern the letters and add some stuff
minor- clean it up a bit and should look dope

 

I like the K in the first, but the rest of it is ugly. You need to lose the little bits and arrows, and straigten up some letters.
The second is Ok, the arrow in the A is not good, but i like how its kinda symetrical .
The last needs to be straightened out asswel, especially at the bottom of the K.
Its weird some parts look really well, and some look like shit

Thanks for your crit man

 

i know i got told to do simples but this one is from before, crits??
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and a simple, tell me what i need to improve
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star-the simple is nice just make sure all ur bars are the same width. and keep doing those
eack-give crits and ull get em

 

star:
First one, make sure u do ur 3d or shadowing behind de letters
Ex: ur 2d of ur R shouldnt go over ur A

second one is better even tho ur letters seem to bcome smaller and smaller from left to right, when u do block letters like that use a ruler to make sure thye form a straight horizontal line

 

South-Pole - carry the bottom of the e over on the first one so it lines up.
dark - go simpler. forget the arrows. on the second one half of your letters have straight lines bars and the r and k are like bubble. be consistant.
minor crimes - In my opinion it looks fine.
dead sheep - it looks pretty good except that the e and a on dead, on the top of the letters, slant upwards. make them straight across.
dying to live - it looks fine to me keep at it. you might want to get rid of the blocks the k is standing on, in the last one
starone - keep doin what your doin.
eack - I dont really know how to crit a wildstyle like that. in my opinion it looks great.

Too bad I have nothing worth posting right now.

 

didnt get any crits

i dont get what fucking toys dont fucking understand, they post something, without giving crits, and get more crits than i do, wtf?

 

1) your an idiot, the blue in the background is there for a reason, the shield goes around the outside of your letters, it can also be called a final outline.
honestly, ive never thought about why you color in the blank parts inbetween letters, its just what i was taught, plus it looks good, and you always see it done along with a shield/final outline.

also, the wave in the sketch, gives it a little extra soemthing, instead of just a straight line, plus, his styles kinda flowy, os a straight line COULD kind of pull everything together, but with something this simple, i think itd just look bland.

dawsek, i like that, and your more complicated stuff.


statik-sorry, your picture didnt show up a first..

 

yes, i can.
people who say you add 3-d and a more fancy fill to that, are seriously mistaken.
it doesnt look like hes using bars, and if he is, hes not doing it right. the structure is lacking, the size is messed up throughout it, and he honestly shouldnt be worrying about colors yet.
and adding 3-d and a fancy fill wont cover that up to anyone who even slightly knows what their talking about.

so im not flickless..
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my god,
im so sick of kids like you.
im trying to help you and him.
i mean, no i dont like your crits, why?
because theyre bad and will get him and anyone else at the same place to nowhere good.
if you always wanna be wack, then go ahead, take your own advice.
add whatever the fuck you want to bad structure, itll get you so much fucking respect in real life. who doesnt like wack tags, throwies and pieces all over their city?

last night..
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silentvandal- good consistent letters which i like and pretty good fill

 

silent vandal - it's nice i like but the d looks a bit like and o?
akel - on the bottom one, maybe make the l's leg not so round?
stak - make the a's hole bigger

theone and chers
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silentvandal - i really like the letters, the e is sick.
exhale - dont know if thats yours or one of your friend's stuff but it looks good i just can't read it..
Here's my stuff, can i get some critz on it please.
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need help...paiting this tommrow
(cant do a good T...)
crits plz

 

Dying to Live - Last ones decent
- Lose the arrows in the first two
Star01 - Hate the first one
-Second one is nice, good place to start from, liking those simples
Eack -Damn im feelin that one, just don't like the extension on the E
Thesilentvandal- Why does the middle part of the W overlap the right side of it? seems outta place in my opinion
-Other than that, looks dope

 

this page is fresh apart from 'the ground up' piece. sorry dude ya need to work on ya proportions and bar widths.

hello bsc if any of you are still around..........watsup alive homeboy!!

 

i tryed to do simple block letters is it any better ?