Mr Tasty: thts dope you need to get a better camera tho. haha. NEZ89: like the throw the piece looks like hez tho. scoot: i only rly like the e BORG: dopeness i want to also know what kind of markers you use. evade: yeah use capitol a like tht e Scare2: good cloring but wrk on your structure. thicken up your bars douchebag4life: dont worry about drop shadow and what not yet just kep working on those simples. heres what i got. critz pleaseee.
los-give crits to get em. nez-frickin raw. i love that throw. kelio-youre steady improving on it. but it seems like the style changes as you move from left to right. tone down the e and the s just a little. dice-youre getting there. try to keep your lines straighter. colored versions of last nights work: the scanner didnt pick up all the colors in this. the 3d is orange. [Broken External Image]:http://img108.imageshack.us/img108/9855/polkasp5.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/5183/tallgp3.th.jpg
borg thats ill same with taste i like the colours speshly the orange bits i like the pink bubles but i dont like that yellow for some reson but thats just me
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dice the bottom of ur e should be more round try to be less sketchy and make ur letters the same hight so ither make the d shorter or the rest taller make ur i wider and ur d a little slimer and just keep practising heres a sketch i did any crits? suggestions?
PEZ - its good, but darken it. Lose the arrows. other than that, good. Douchebag - Lose the 3D, and work on that handie. Stay simples. You're on the right track
pez- nice simple letters man i like that. work on your hand style though because if u dont have a good hand u wont have good nething else it all starts with just a tag man. douchebag.i cant see it that well but maybe u need to go simple. from what i see u need to work on 3d but i cant really tell
Escobar you're on the right track just lose alot of the bumps.Just keep it up you'll get it eventually. View attachment 298232 View attachment 298233 I think the colours ruined it.I made the the letters look too small.Also I think I should have put more arrows and extensions on the left half.
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drak-the cheach wizerd is good orange would have been a better colour to use also try and erase ur pencle lines itle look way cleaner as far as letters the a is the best one the d is lacking the k could look a bit more like a k and less of an hand the arow should have came from the bottm of the k escobar- those letters are looking good i would suggest that u interlock the c with the o and the b with the o oh and the a with the b and the s with the e but not to much just a little. can i get some more critz on my piece i wanna fix it up tommarrow and im not near a comp so i need em now
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Well cheers for the crits pocket change. But yeah the O would look better with the star smaller, The E would look better if the middle was bgger than the top two halfs, that way you can make the S wider aswell which i think would make it look better aswell. the D is fine just maybe put a spiral in it or sumin, lines bore me lol