Less arrows crowns and whatnot everywhere. You have a sick style but I think it would look a lot better with something other then pen.
those sex without hands are dope. they got a chillen and cheu feel to them.. mind you i would take out alot of those add ons.. its like you were trying to make it looke better by putting stars and swirls.. by itself it looks dope.. just try not going over board with the addons
chill with addons and start simple completely www.nightcrawla.com look that entire site over^ version 1 and 2
decent start i guess, just dont do that thing from the t to the e. also get yur t closer to yur o like yur s is
sote - if your gonna connect two letters you might wanna think about connectin all of them. also put your letters closer like silent said. then post flicks and we will continue. with your critiques. lol
You said dont connect the t and the e. But i cant seem to find a way to put the T close to the O and the E without connecting and without it looking really jumbled.
try to put the t bar over the o. and think out your tag man. you've got forever to master it. its your tag. you should do it the way you feel it. but u dont want it to look crap. you know how it goes.
Sote- Maybe you should make all letters capital. then you would not have the problem with the t and e. but the marker looks really solid and the lines are smooth. Morne- the letters seem kind of awkward and there is that weird thing on the E. try different letter styles. I just write a few pages of one letter and move on throughout your name. it helps me when I want to make something look a bit better. the ink was food coloring so its not as bright as i want it but it works. Crits please...
intaout - i say bunch it all up closer, especially the k, and keep it even across the bottom. silentchaos - for now, lose the little kicks on the m and the e, and try to pull that n out a little more, you almost lost it. sote - try working with a capital T, at first i read "sole" heres something im workin on.... 3 pics to show progression....why? idfk. [Broken External Image]:http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/3262/marciehi4.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/9192/marcie2zf3.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/8731/marcie3sq2.jpg crits?