thanx for the feedback everyone.., i heard a view of yàll say my (piece) looks more like a detailed throw up, it actually is a throw up, but because i used stars and different colours i just called it a piece.. i already designed a view (real)pieces but i first need to work on my cancontrol and find better ways to fill.. untill that time i`ll be makin throwup`s and simple pieces (or detailed throwup`s) Cezr,hungr,chalk,stok,dajam,eskimo and dial.on - like what i see, good job anom:work on your letters and maybe add some shadow next time rape:i would fill in that empty spaces.. overall it looks good verl:i`d stick with simple letters,no arrows and don`t forget shadow nope:work on your fill in,your E, and make your letters the same size cerex:not bad for your 1st throw, but needs work on your letters and maybe add a forcefield slim:really needs work on the shadow and on the bubbles,nice spot tho
dajam - i really like it smae - seems like you really wasted your time with that, it's a good spot you should have waited until you had some decent letters cerex - not bad for your first time painting, i would get some fat tips next time and make the drop shadow not so big saga - not bad, i would try and make the S more proportioned to the other letters some recent things View attachment 301275 View attachment 301276 View attachment 301277 View attachment 301278 View attachment 301279 View attachment 301280 View attachment 301281 View attachment 301282 View attachment 301283
karma - on your fourth one you forgot the 3d on half the K. but other than that it looks real good keep up the good work.
krama- i like that throw execpt for the M. work on that a bit... newest try at a piece... [Broken External Image]:http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/5716/marco001wn4.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/5716/marco001wn4.d93563dd0e.jpg i wish you guys could see the first 3 letters, my k sucks hard core ass... ill get it next time. random face i freestyled... [Broken External Image]:http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/6945/marco008jx0.jpg and my boy, anom... [Broken External Image]:http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/108/marco009fw9.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/108/marco009fw9.50984d1e64.jpg
fossill- its good for ur first time but schtch som more work on the shadow plz when u fill in take longer stroks it will look cleaner karma- looking good hoed u manage to paint those go buses slim- that is a safe spot but work on ur letters cause ther preatty wak (no offence) practise a bitt on papper and under bridges then paint those kick ass spots trust me u thank ur self when u get a solied throw and some decent letters down dajam- that fad is amazing really clean letters to lol we painted on the same day a piece i did with scrap cans (freestyled) a throw i did a while ago in the summer the a is wak just thought id post it but i would really apretat some quality crits on my piece (i know that me e and r are to big)
if i were u i wuldnt have cared if ppl seen me i wulda did my best n then got the fuck outta there if a person in the train sees u u jus go faster n then jump n run home haha work on ur lettering n the can control...
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clowneycakes - so far lookin good pez -nice piece, but try using darker colors next time cror - the r is nice new piece i did yesterday night... [Broken External Image]:http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/6281/s6300505vn7.jpg
ok, you've done what every other writer did as a toy.... lose the pointless arrow on the e, it ruined what i would call a decent start
jersOneTIC - very nice, but i find the r is not really fitting in with the rest of the letters karmatikal - I like the karma ones, but the Rufus one... The R and s, i would make the points on top smaller made this one a few days ago and today i made a picture, it looked better in the dark though [Broken External Image]:http://img356.imageshack.us/img356/2190/dsc00208da7.jpg
yeah i know the graff isn't cool, still practicing, it's better practicing on walls with people come and go then legal walls, cause then you don't have the feeling you can get caught at any moment i always have the problem, when i go to a spot i have exacly in mind what i am going to put up, and when i am at the spot it get's blank in my head and then i put something stupid up XD ahwhell practice makes perfect (they say) tonight i'm going out again (if it ain't gonna rain today) and see what i can get up, i post tomorrow the pics if i don't fall asleep waiting for 3AM