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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. ILuvHoodRats

    ILuvHoodRats Senior Member

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    oh and by the way
    daws is 14 and burns yall NO HANDS.
     
  2. AnteUp

    AnteUp Elite Member

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    its better than ur bites daws, lukks pretty good
     
  3. Sumoe

    Sumoe Elite Member

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    Age doesn't have too much to do with it...there are 14-15 year olds that are way better than daws. Glad he's not biting anymore, though.
     
  4. T O K E

    T O K E Elite Member

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    anyone wanna give me some crits lol?
     
  5. sex without condoms

    sex without condoms Elite Member

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    colored pencils are the sheeet
     
  6. T O K E

    T O K E Elite Member

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    your style is pretty wild, do you use bars?
     
  7. sex without condoms

    sex without condoms Elite Member

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    i dont really but i started that way.
    if you look at the way my letters are formed it looks like bars were used
     
  8. Seek139

    Seek139 Senior Member

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    Don't include everyone did I ride his dick? ohh and for your overly "dick riding" choice of words "burns yall NO HANDS" you might want to hear alittle quote from tkid 170 himself. "Nobody's(writers) style is better than one another its style its something individual to all people nobody is better than one another." -tkid 170
    Can I get an amen?

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    Not exactly done so I'm going to work on it all tommorow night...
     
  9. Scare2

    Scare2 Senior Member

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    word to that seek. ur revolutionary mided dude.
    and i like the new one real technical. they would look much better shaded or colored.

    hella people are 14 im 14 bastardos 14. but props for that one daws it looks real good.
     
    Last edited: Sep 18, 2007
  10. AnteUp

    AnteUp Elite Member

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    senyooorrr, seek ur kinda over doin it wit the random bars. it takes away from the actual letters
     
  11. Seek139

    Seek139 Senior Member

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    I'm going through an evolutionary stage with myself bro but when it "random bars" start working out to benefit my overall flow you let me know right now I'm experimenting with stuff like the cylinder's and cutout's.
     
  12. AnteUp

    AnteUp Elite Member

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    oh dont get me wrong i think its amazing, i can read it, and i think it flows very nicely, but other people, might not see the letters, jus a heads up
     
  13. -Sinn-

    -Sinn- Senior Member

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    bump
     
  14. Attican

    Attican Senior Member

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    Yeah...I can't read it.

    : /
     
  15. Yukon

    Yukon Senior Member

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  16. Scare2

    Scare2 Senior Member

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    i agree with ante but also you dont necesarily allways want people to read it. you can also use colors to distinguish main bars from extras an stuff. no wutimean?

    yukon the arrows and curls seem kinda random but ur letter structure isnt bad. just keep practicing and do every sketch with progression in mind.


    sinn its pretty sick but the little bits on the sides of letters that stick out wouldnt be missed. they dont really add to it at all. also the way its colored highlights the 3D and pushes the letters back. it should be the other way. ur P could be a little closer to the M too.

    o And TOKE go to the streight letter bro. do the bars just like ur keyboard. all streight all SAME WIDTH and no bends or extensions. it helps develop a basis for expansion and for style. they also look tight when done well.
     
    Last edited: Sep 19, 2007
  17. fox on a trampoline

    fox on a trampoline Member

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  18. KASE2

    KASE2 Senior Member

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    FOX ON A TRAMPOLINE - not tryna b mean, but u need work, focus on ur letters b4 u try 2 add hella stuff
     
  19. fox on a trampoline

    fox on a trampoline Member

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    yeah actually the cloud and circle thing is gay but cant change it now...thx
     
  20. Pico Hollywood

    Pico Hollywood Member

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