no offense sume but those where the shittiest crits ive ever heard. wheres the enthusiasm!! if your gunna be a lazy ass and crit poorly atleast do it with UMPH ya know like : "Wow! Good Job Guys, Everyone else, It Was a good Try!! keep at the bars and structure!" jokes man, nice piece comin along nicely.
bastardo- u really need to finish that man grape-nice throw nem- thicken them up a bit and put them closer together hade-that skull character looks good sumoe- badass, what else can i say really bigel-dope as always [Broken External Image]:http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v322/torrie_nilla/demone008.jpgu cant see it but theres a white outline [Broken External Image]:http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v322/torrie_nilla/demone007.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v322/torrie_nilla/demone006.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v322/torrie_nilla/demone005.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v322/torrie_nilla/demone002.jpgbored at work
el that el is ridiculous daisy i think you should keep on with the 1st sketch, its pretty good havent changed my letters in ages
Looks pretty decent... just learn hwo to blend better... or if ur nto trying to blend.... ummm just keep doing ur thang! GYEA
That doesn't flow, ur 3d is off, and just perhaps go simpler. but goodjob on trying... I give you 50% so you barely passed
cerex u made the 3d go on the bottom like u were trna do a shadow yadadamean? id say do str8 letters i mean straight like all boxes seriously that shit helps. alot of dope writers still paint like that u know. so use bars mos def to gain letter structure
oh oh oh.... one more thing... I don't know how you do ur fills, but when I do it, I go side to side which works for me
that sketchy outline looks great on your characters. but on your letters would look much better with a clean outline.
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bastardo, i hate you as usual, blah dope blah and uhhh, i dont really care about my outlines, the difference a clean one would make is so tiny i cant be arsed taking the time. maybe i should use something other than a biro... naaah
i dont get how if u do simple letters it helps make more complicated letters... i think i am have writers block kuhz when i go make my piece look complicated then i juss cant think of anything .... got any ideas
tech14-take it to the chat thread bastardo n el- nice shit as always....dunno y u guys post in the toy forum