silentchaos14: take that simple u just did and find one of your first sketches. u will see improvment just because your dong simples. keep it up!
bumping zens it looks way better with that curve u did on the n just make it taller like u did on the first one and try like makeing some of ur bars start in diffrent spots its hard to explain so look at this [Broken External Image]:http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/7358/jersij7.png all i did was drop the right side of ur n just a little i think it looks better just make ur letters less simple cus u have stright up simples down
yeah yeah, so I write PILLS - PILZ - PILSKILL - PILZROCK - PILAR - PILLER - PILLSTAR - PILSUCK - ZLIP - PYLZ and any other way you can fuck yourself with the fucked up letter flow I chose. I been writing off and on for about uh, two-three years? Fuckin, MSK, AWR, TATS and guys like EWOK, REVS, GLUE, ATLAS really inspire me to push my letters farther. Im going to start practicing more I just want some constructive criticizm.
thank you fube and blue steel but honestly im sick of fuckin simples and i aint goin anywhere yet, im more or less back to where i was with morne. pillz u may be gettin a pm from a certain 666 member.
1. Stop writing Pills 2. If you really have been writing for 2-3 years and thats where you're at, just stop now. Harsh but whatever.
bipolar- nice letters i aint post'd in a mineute. <a href="http://photobucket.com" target="_blank"><img src="http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m50/ninja_303_763/5018.jpg" border="0" alt="Photo Sharing and Video Hosting at Photobucket"></a>
bipolar- nice letters [Broken External Image]:http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m50/ninja_303_763/5018.jpg
blue steel-stuff looks mad dope,feeling the letters like the colouring pills-needs some work bawkster-looks coool ninja-first letter:try making your first bar the same size as your second one second letter-erase it third letter-loooks ok but take off those arrows,and try making your bars the same size View attachment 306371 bla bla,,crits
South Pole- The fill distracts from the letters. If you used a bigger marker for the outline it might be different, but as is, it looks strange. Also, I've never been a huge fan of having those type of faces in letters, but that's just me.
I can't remember the last time I posted here. A few variations on a theme: View attachment 306372 View attachment 306373 View attachment 306374 I'm on the fence about the squiggly extensions, and I know the T is the weakest letter. Comments? Criticism?
I'm not really feeling the S .. especially in the first one don't overlap the bottom part of the S over the top part.
Eh... I can understand that. I still think it looks interesting, though. Most S's are pretty similar and I was trying to spice it up. Other than that is there a specific thing you don't like about the S?
Sort-the fill was made to distract from the letters im realy feeling that style,not realy feeling that arrow on the t though and not much your t
I'm very off and on but, I'm not quitting this shit. It lives inside me. I might change my name, but it's unlikely. You guys should know what I mean when I say I've been OFF and ON for those 2-3 years... Mostly writing to avoid classwork, Im out of highschool now and you'll see me apply myself. watch out.
[Broken External Image]:http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/ZensSimple.jpg little simple from last night [Broken External Image]:http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/TasrExchange.jpg exchange for G-fat. didnt put too much effort into it as u can see lol crits on both? terower- on the last one it looks like sorf so i might wanna lose the extension on the T
pils: just invest in some better markers. or the time it takes to go rack some. terower: im likin the style, the second one is lookin the illest and that f looks sick. blue steel: damn man, thats lookin reallllly nice. and the character is tight aswell. soutpole: im likin the style and all, but is it a k/kife, or an L/Life? anyways, some sketches from recently. [Broken External Image]:http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/6685/82860257hh6.jpg