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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. bla5t

    bla5t Member

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    you're always down on yourself man.. cheer the fuck up...work on your simples.
     
  2. Fube

    Fube Elite Member

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    silentchaos14: take that simple u just did and find one of your first sketches. u will see improvment just because your dong simples. keep it up!
     
  3. blue.steel

    blue.steel Senior Member

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    bumping
    zens it looks way better with that curve u did on the n
    just make it taller like u did on the first one
    and try like makeing some of ur bars start in diffrent spots
    its hard to explain so look at this
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    all i did was drop the right side of ur n just a little
    i think it looks better
    just make ur letters less simple
    cus u have stright up simples down
     
  4. Bipolar*Pills

    Bipolar*Pills Member

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    yeah yeah, so I write PILLS - PILZ - PILSKILL - PILZROCK - PILAR - PILLER - PILLSTAR - PILSUCK - ZLIP - PYLZ and any other way you can fuck yourself with the fucked up letter flow I chose. I been writing off and on for about uh, two-three years? Fuckin, MSK, AWR, TATS and guys like EWOK, REVS, GLUE, ATLAS really inspire me to push my letters farther. Im going to start practicing more I just want some constructive criticizm.


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  5. silentchaos14

    silentchaos14 Elite Member

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    thank you fube and blue steel but honestly im sick of fuckin simples and i aint goin anywhere yet, im more or less back to where i was with morne. pillz u may be gettin a pm from a certain 666 member.
     
  6. Bipolar*Pills

    Bipolar*Pills Member

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  7. silentchaos14

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  8. Licossa

    Licossa Member

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    1. Stop writing Pills
    2. If you really have been writing for 2-3 years and thats where you're at, just stop now.

    Harsh but whatever.
     
  9. ninja_303_763

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  11. South-Pole

    South-Pole Elite Member

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    blue steel-stuff looks mad dope,feeling the letters like the colouring
    pills-needs some work
    bawkster-looks coool
    ninja-first letter:try making your first bar the same size as your second one
    second letter-erase it
    third letter-loooks ok but take off those arrows,and try making your bars the same size

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    bla bla,,crits
     
  12. terower

    terower Senior Member

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    South Pole- The fill distracts from the letters. If you used a bigger marker for the outline it might be different, but as is, it looks strange. Also, I've never been a huge fan of having those type of faces in letters, but that's just me.
     
  13. terower

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  14. bla5t

    bla5t Member

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    I'm not really feeling the S .. especially in the first one don't overlap the bottom part of the S over the top part.
     
  15. terower

    terower Senior Member

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    Eh... I can understand that. I still think it looks interesting, though. Most S's are pretty similar and I was trying to spice it up. Other than that is there a specific thing you don't like about the S?
     
  16. South-Pole

    South-Pole Elite Member

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    Sort-the fill was made to distract from the letters
    im realy feeling that style,not realy feeling that arrow on the t though and not
    much your t
     
  17. Bipolar*Pills

    Bipolar*Pills Member

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    I'm very off and on but, I'm not quitting this shit. It lives inside me. I might change my name, but it's unlikely. You guys should know what I mean when I say I've been OFF and ON for those 2-3 years... Mostly writing to avoid classwork, Im out of highschool now and you'll see me apply myself. watch out.
     
  18. silentchaos14

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  19. Bon3s

    Bon3s Senior Member

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    pils: just invest in some better markers. or the time it takes to go rack some.
    terower: im likin the style, the second one is lookin the illest and that f looks sick.
    blue steel: damn man, thats lookin reallllly nice. and the character is tight aswell.
    soutpole: im likin the style and all, but is it a k/kife, or an L/Life?

    anyways, some sketches from recently.
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  20. South-Pole

    South-Pole Elite Member

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