scab-dont revert to those just try others
sex- thats sexy love that style
amar- ur throws are allll dope but u should take more time on ur peices it flows nicely but it looks kinda rushed and the first A is a little taller
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fuuuuck school. crits

 

yo yo sucka foh

Game you be on the right track my dute

SEX I STILL WANT YOU
plus I really dig your style its lookin so so so so tight. If it was a candy bar I'd totally rack the whole boxxx nahhmean
kthnks.

 

well i write kovr
and the OH is in quotes cause i hate the single letter O
so the OH makes the O sound instead of using the letter
ya digg?

 

dude im loving that style.

 

amar for now keep your bars the same width. but its gettin allot better.

 

rise- colors arent too good
nem- if you have better structure now why would you go backwards?
sex- looks tight
nasr- not bad, right side of a is too big

workin simples
ya i know, the n is fucked sideways

 

im liken it sen

 

Sen the extensions on the S and E should kinda match the N.
Also make your N bigger and try putting an extension on the top left of it going to the left or on the right coming off to the right to maybe match the style up a bit more.

 

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silver pen fucking broke so i couldnt finish excuse the big silver blob


crits?

 

bump for more crits=] extention advice would be much appreciated i have horrible trouble with extentions.

 

fuck yeah relm got upsss roudn these here parts especially on the red line

 

whahappen- nice throwie
nasr- that style's sick
sen- i like that S and E

crits?

 

not sure if we cover'd this, but what does it say? excelent work btw.
-d

 

i see k,u,s,e,m but idk if im missing anything

 

sen- very good simples
h- Simples
dusk- build your letters with bars, then start to bend them into a good looking letter
amok- no extensions, just work on the letters
I should have posted my letters, sorry only pic I have of them, but they are the same




well here are two drawings I did today, I am planing on doing a production with my only tagging bro in the crew for his dad who died Saturday. So I was wondering which looked better (just the letters, not the character), thanks

 

your letters arent good you need to focus on simples and do them.

 

i hope we all know that sky has the dopest style of anyone. anyone..

and in that piece i think that the "u" might be an I. im not sure.

emjay i take it back. your letters are dope as hell. especially that fuckin A. holy shit. just work the can control

finished these

 

First decent sketch in weeks. I'm pleased

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bounch i always loved your style(exspecialy your karaks)and that sketch shows why keep it up man