p_town: ... Anyways, did these vertical ones..Happy with them actually. I don't know, lol. I was thinking of that guy Eyesore and he always does vertical tags. [Broken External Image]:http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/5167/verticaleuphoak1.jpg Not gunna post the other couple of pages becuase there all just the same tags. But I did come up with these really simple ones that flow, I can do in one line, and are readable.(It's a nasty picture but it's just for the jist of it.) [Broken External Image]:http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/7534/flowybasiceuphoonelineyv3.jpg
Don't join your H to your O like that, it makes your H look like a backwards 4. Same goes for your R. Don't link it like that. The vertical ones look silly (but good on you for trying something different). I think vertical tags need to have wider letters. Your letters are too dissimilar in the vertical tags, your E is really fancy looking and your P is really simple. All the letters look kinda silly - try doing wider letters which are simpler, ones that look more like the letters on your keyboard. You could always try a round/bullet tipped marker as well, they make tags look way different. Your tag should look good no matter what marker you use but some tags suit particular markers - I think mine looks best with a bullet tipped 'cause I have an F with horizontal bars. Nobody else gets a crit 'cause I can't be bothered looking at the other pages 'cause I'm a lazy bitch.
bump for crits citizin - the EU on your vertical ones look sick, after that the letters slip a bit far apart and the O really needs work and as in_the_red said, dont join your H, makes it look wierd
Looks like the same exact thing. First off, whatdo you write so we know how to help? Lose the circle, it's different, but, it just doesn't look right. And yeah I'm gunna work with the PHO on my vertical tag because I'm really diggin it for some reason. but I have no idea how to hook up a p or an h. I'll figure something out. But, on the other hand..I don't know. The circle looks kind of good..lol. Try some without it.
citizen- just work on adding style to it melo- i like it, its clean. and you're gonna do more than one tag right? sometimes use the circle and sometimes dont...
It's nice, it's simple. That's always the way to g. Just work with it some mroe.. And, I highly, highly, highly, highly, highly, highly doubt this but.. [Broken External Image]:http://www.puregraffiti.com/graffiti-gallery/data/503/1188738627_f.jpg you? edit: nevermind, lol, youre in the toy section I don't know what I'm thinking.
Citizin, that's no better, it's really messy. Don't make your O look like a teardrop. Lose the little extensions on the U, P and H. SIMPLE LETTERS! I should probably do a tag for you to show you what I mean... Maybe later. Sen, that looks pretty nice, you don't really need any help, just practice. Mello, space your letters out a little so we can see them a bit, it just kinda looks like a scribble. Work on your letters before you use stuff like circles.
Yeah but I disagree with Mello. I'm better than him (at tags) so if I were you I'd listen to me, but then again I haven't posted my latest tags on here anyway. It's up to you who you listen to though. There's no right and wrong in graff, but there's a general aesthetic, and I feel most people would agree with me. You need to work on style, but that doesn't necessarily mean making your letters look more complex. Some of the hottest tags are simple as. The letters people told you were too simple weren't necessarily too simple, they just needed to be structured differently. Have I explained myself okay?
I think I've gt a pretty simple normal tag down. I use it alot. I can do it in like 5 seconds, I love it. This vertical shit is just for other obsticals like polls and things of more length. It goes from small to bigger because I think it looks better like that. (Sorry for the extra space) [Broken External Image]:http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/8770/simpleeugk4.jpg
I don't mean to be rude, but that's not normal looking, it's whack, you don't have it 'down'. Your P, H and O are all skinny and look like a little kid has done them, while your E and U are fat. Don't link your letters. Just practice heaps. How old are you, by the way? Just wondering.
[Broken External Image]:http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/2238/1010071546aoe4.jpg I agree w. everything that "in the red" has said on these pages Crits?
kase- I don't know..can't really tell. work with paper. muse- looks like..oil bar paint? I don't know, it's nice as fuck though. Im out.