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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.

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  1. Citizin

    Citizin Senior Member

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    Cool vid. To be honest I don't dig the E but it's hard to get something original.
     
  2. syrne

    syrne Senior Member

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    ai20.tinypic.com_rhtjbd.jpg
    kinda messed up the D o well....
     
  3. djsupreeme

    djsupreeme Elite Member

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  4. brunorod

    brunorod Member

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  5. Church

    Church Senior Member

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    [Broken External Image]:http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/3789/mobious1tag2ku7.jpg
    [Broken External Image]:http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/107/mobious1ok8.jpg
    [Broken External Image]:http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/9464/mobious1tagvf6.jpg

    Those are some of my old tags, since then I've been revising my style and creating a semi-new concept. I write Mobious1. Sorry the pics are poor quality.

    Crits are welcome, and before anyone says anything, NO it does not take too long to write.

    I'll post up my newest tag later.
     
  6. the end

    the end Senior Member

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    GO SIMPLE!
    all the addons are shit, you need to learn what makes a letter before you can make extensions
     
  7. sex without condoms

    sex without condoms Elite Member

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  8. StAtiK1

    StAtiK1 Senior Member

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    church that looks like it would take a bit to long to write, especially when your bombing lol
     
  9. dim

    dim Elite Member

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    ai211.photobucket.com_albums_bb184_dimr_01_IMG_0550.jpg
    tshirt i produced today
     
  10. Roolete

    Roolete Elite Member

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    it would probably be cool with people who dont write, but i dont like any of it. simple down the d, make the i and r more recognizable, and work on the flow in the r. and lost the other shit
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    which ones the bestestest?
     
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  11. the end

    the end Senior Member

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    cher - my vote goes to green and tourquoise

    i made you a throw ill post in exchange thread. :)
     
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  12. Kool-Aid Man

    Kool-Aid Man Senior Member

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  13. Church

    Church Senior Member

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    Not called addons or extensions, they're cadels. I know how to make a letter, I've been practicing calligraphy for 3 years.

    What I was trying to do was make a tag that stood out, because when there are doors, or walls that have everyones tag on it, no one walking by is going to notice one from the other. Unless your a writer yourself, people are just going to think someone scribbled on the wall. So when I did this tag I was trying to take away the flow from it so a persons eyes just won't fly over it. I wanted to keep the overall form boxy so it kind of had a wall around it from any other tags, this way it would be easier to notice.

    The end tell me anything else about what you don't like about them please. Besides hating the cadels which I admit do take away from the tag because they're overdone and look kind of sloppy:p

    Sexwithout Condoms tell me what you don't like about it, or what I could do to it to make it more visually appealing.

    I know how to make those boring, typical graffiti tags that everyone else has. I was just trying to make something unique, so even people that don't write can just glance at it and tell from its style, "thats mobious1". I'll post up other pictures of tags I've been working on and a few that are like a bad cliche typical graff handstyle:eek:

    thanks for the crits and keep them coming. I do want to improve on this idea.

    BTW-cool tshirt dim, post another picture of how big the image is compared to the rest of the shirt though.

    I like the second tag koolaid. When making your E though, try to make all the lines in one stroke. I dont know if its from the angle you took the pic, but it looks like the top spine of the E is shifted from the bottom. And bring the S up a little, because the tag sorta cascades. My whole tag cascades and I think it looks crappy because of it. Use the A and the S to sorta trap the K and E in. Overall the tag itself is clean and simple. good job
     
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  14. full_tymer

    full_tymer Member

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    looks like gang graffiti
     
  15. Fat4l_ONE

    Fat4l_ONE Senior Member

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    Did the tag a while back and scanned it and did some stuff w/ it on photoshop for another site
    Wat u think i need to work on more? I like Metro 519's style
     
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  16. Church

    Church Senior Member

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    Gangs use spin offs of textura quadrata, old e, and even some bastard secretary scripts. The reason my tag might look this way is because I used the same standards as influence.
     
  17. South-Pole

    South-Pole Elite Member

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    are you doing graffiti or caligraphy cause both of them don't go along
     
  18. ...AMOK...

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  19. matman

    matman Member

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    yo

    south pole no offense but that was a mad stupid comment saying caligraphy cant go with graff it all about the personal prefrence of how peeps wana write check up on some history bud
     
  20. matman

    matman Member

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    yo

    some of u guys getting good but alotta guys that are trying too much complex shit that looks retardid should try gonig with soem simple more 80s or 90s handstyles like cher for example u gotta fix that tag like i not dissin u or nething jus helping u out
    if i where u id right now focus on soem simpler yet illin handstyles ha and werk ur way up