casa-despite what everyone else is saying i like that first one alot. the E on the second one, not so much. like borg said you should fatten it up a lil skribl-hmm too pointy for my taste, not much structure borg-your characters are getting better and better props experimenting with a new name kinda, [Broken External Image]:http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v322/torrie_nilla/shoows003.jpg crits plz
yeah i like the first casa too . . . didnt know you could bite such a simple U, a zillion people do it like that daisyface - i like how you have a consistent bend to your bars which helps it look right . . keep bending em every which way you can . . .maybe try pinchin the W in more tighter and bringin the middle bar up more, same thing with the E try bringin the 3 horizontal bars in more so it more tight/squished in and extend the middle bar of the E . . . with the yellowish 3d maybe try running a darker ornage on th einside to give it alil more depth and not soo much plain yellow look with all the open sapce 3d you have going, it takes 2 seconds but really makes 3ds look better in my opinion
^^^ you need some finer tipped markers or something daisy- second one looks nice cile- dope i think im going to start writing ten10 b/c i just like t's a lot
Sen - the lower case E looks better Bsure - bottom one looks ok, middle looks like it might be ok but work on your colouring, top one looks whack Daisy - the top E in the bottom piece would look pretty good [Broken External Image]:http://img130.imageshack.us/img130/1456/melo14vo3.jpg
mello- not digging the m or the o the e and l have potential ten-digging that throw keep it up bsur- simples.. please casa- lookspretty decent
mek im feelin the style drop a darker outline on those so we can see them better though and start doing more canvases/colored pieces. where the characs at?
enigma- not feelin the throws, the pieces are nice though. [Broken External Image]:http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/IDEAL/IDEALCover.jpg my black book cover. [Broken External Image]:http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/IDEAL/IDEALSimple2.jpg shit from class today. crits?
the blackbook cover is quite good, but i didnt like the second picture at all. mainly because of the squigglyness, it just made the letters look really bad. try doing some straight lines and curves n stuff instead of squiggley stuff. the blackbook cover is quite good though.
Not trying to be an ass... But you're progressing at an extremely slow pace, Slient. But, you are improving at least. Forget about the squiggly shit for now, focus on the straight letters.
Don't be fooled.I've seen people with twice the post count but are still toy toy toy.Ideal just keep with the simples and don't do anything else.Absolutely no bits coming off,little flairs,squiggly lines or lumpy letters.Do you know how to wield a pen man?No beef or anything but your letters no matter how simple have shaky as fuck lines.The newest one is a big improvement though.Just do that.
new style i just made up on accident, anybody feelin it? View attachment 313380 View attachment 313381 View attachment 313382 ideal- nice simple dude, lookin good. shit under it is ugly tho. keep ya lines straight. enigma- old school lookin fresh, that throwie is off the chain tho, so dope. capo- i dont know anything about euro so i cant crit that but, its kinda ugly, reminds me of a playground. throwz dont look to bad tho, id work on those some. mello- yer m looks like an octopus, id fix that. pretty much make your simples a little more readable, like the e is two pieces and the l is also. the o doesnt fit with the rest. ten- the top one is my favorite, id go with that one. the t is lookin hot.
crits? improvement of any sort? [Broken External Image]:http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/7284/reg1vv3.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/4068/reg2uk0.jpg
[Broken External Image]:http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x159/vampireboy65/DSCI0117-6.jpg just did a simple s i really like it thinking about making the beging of my peice crits? [Broken External Image]:http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x159/vampireboy65/DSCI0118-2.jpg just a fast throw up crits? SANS: like the lettering and the color over all it great. Garbage: i like were your going with it just fix it up looks good soc:your amazing