View attachment 317301 Pandapooo View attachment 317302 Olick View attachment 317303 BKR honest opinions?? and look closely too. i kno people who just see fancy lines and curves and think its good. what about the letter structure?
get a hold of your ego for a second. its pretty gross mayne. work on it. you have good ideas. char is pretty bad.
i didnt have an ego. if i showed a random person on the street they would go "wow that looks tight" but all they look at is the fancy shamsy stuff. not the letters. i was tired of never gettin real crits. thanks man
jroc- lookin decent, keep at em scab- letters need to be tweaked, not feeling any flow either daws- learn to give some mother fucking crits son!!!!!!!!!!!! haze- that looks fly as hell, keep up, letters, structure and flow are ace olick- to wild, to fast, simplify it slightly, maybe some color???? hard to see it all clearly found this canvas i painted 3 months ago or so, and i dont know what to put on it, so if you guys could hook up some suggestions/ideas, it'd be greatly appreciated [Broken External Image]:http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/6290/june17004vs7.jpg
OLICK:Try some different backgrounds..the bubble thing sucks for the letter structure..but reeally nice letters ink it.. Im pretty sure someone alreayd write MOSH but whateverr... [Broken External Image]:http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/7553/picture064gq8.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/825/picture069ny6.jpg
nice pen control ahahah. make the "bubbles" bigger and not all of them the same size unless you want to make sum sick design with a bunch of dots "dunno how to explain it. but owell" nice pen control and good choice of colors
cile the top left hand side of the e is looking to stock compared to the rest of the letter try make it more like the bottom of it
borg dope except the bottom leg part, the right side specifically, make it come up instead of go out. naw meen?
i feel so left out. i havent gotten anyones pack yet :[ hopefully tomorrow. but that sticker background with the handy is hot. im feeling the piece with the lime force.
tezer - maybe use a thinner outlining marker for the pieces? uhh quickie, a's hidden, simple sucks. and it's on an envelope! crits on how to improve?
teze- nice simples and characters are dopeness (nice sig haha) ways- work on your y, you got a hint of style simples
my bad here they are [Broken External Image]:http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/53/blackbacktr4.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/4820/m3dqc6.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/403/newfilldux9.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/341/lastup4.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/4940/nwpnpurpee3.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/8373/unfinshdnwiw6.jpgcrits ? -borg-nice..vry clean but the "c" and the "i" rly does look like an "a" -sex-i lov da throwies -tezer-those karaks are sick n i like your handys as well .. your letters are nice but i rly like the drips n shit -ideal-um yah add some more style n start sketchin more than you post also keep the top of the "a" connected looks like an "H" lil bit -sen-that simple is sexy lol -nem-i like it but i would prolly like it better with a shadow or a 3d but thats only my opinion -okeys-its alright but i like the simple that you went over better than than one you finished -haze-rly dig the color scheme n the letters are looking solid ... n i normally used plain sharpies for fills n outlines n the thinner lines are a ultra fine bull point pen i picked up the other day -olick-you do look pretty solid idk maybe do less addons or less crazy n see how it looks -mosh-dig the fill .. but rly work on structure n flow of letters