new piece i did last night - need crit please i just started to write about 3 weeks ago..i just practice in my friend's basement right now until i get better. Need crit please. [Broken External Image]:http://www.hookedonhiphop.com/images/graff/11132007_1.JPG [Broken External Image]:http://www.hookedonhiphop.com/images/graff/11132007_2.JPG
Lose the pointy shit comin outta that red shit and make it like a cloud or just fade it out or something... Maybe put a shadow on the shit too and it'd be aight.
sore that shits fucking ill i cant even tell u how to improve u got a dope throw n resk your r is dope but your last letter there needs sum working on
shitty piece in my basement. [Broken External Image]:http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c20/iamjohnnydamon18/Photo-0130-1.jpg
i need some advice i run out of paint alot cause its hard to get supplies where i live. but what else am i missing to make my shit look bad ass??? help!
whats missing? about 5+ years of experience. its gonna take years to get your stuff looking "bad ass" in the mean while. practice... and you might wanna get rid of the "true kings" sig
The shadow is fucked up but im still pretty satisfied since it was the first time I've ever gone bombing.
new piece...crit appreciated i'm still sketching... still practicing...i know i need work but i think i'm coming along pretty well. I started to use paint only a few weeks ago...any crit? [Broken External Image]:http://www.hookedonhiphop.com/images/graff/pic_1.JPG [Broken External Image]:http://www.hookedonhiphop.com/images/graff/pic_2.JPG