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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. F3B3S

    F3B3S Senior Member

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    doap character nez...all u gotta do is workon ur word...
     
  2. glass

    glass Senior Member

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    love that new stuff AMK
     
  3. Fube

    Fube Elite Member

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    DELETED YOUR SHIT. IaMaMoRoN. watch it.

    * If you're going to post something make it constructive - it's no help at all saying 'that sucks', also if you feel like giving props to someones work try and throw in a little constructive criticism as well.

    * No tolerence for beef, it will all be deleted, take it to the toy beef thread or PMs.
     
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  4. Enormous

    Enormous Member

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    watcha think about these?
    ai107.photobucket.com_albums_m304_hendrix228_graff0038_1.jpg
    ai107.photobucket.com_albums_m304_hendrix228_graff0079.jpg
     
  5. NEZ89

    NEZ89 Senior Member

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    the first ones pretty dope, probably leave out a few of those add ons and remove the ext. between the E and N
    the second one leave out most of the arrows, fix the leg of the R, and make the N look more like an N, remove the bak extention
     
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  6. silentchaos14

    silentchaos14 Elite Member

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    man no one seems to be gettin this. ill give some crits i guess.
    cerex- work on your shadows more.
    shamee- likin all of it, your S is a little wierd though. too flat imo.
    mass- even though i dont like u your stuff is still nice. your P looks sorta like an F though.
    hidden- lookin good. second and last one are my favourites.
    enormous- too many add-ons and uneven.
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    crits?
     
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  7. glass

    glass Senior Member

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    shame: def. see potential in that second piece, im liking where it's going man keep it up

    enorm: loose all that excess stuff and concentrate on making a better structure similar to the one in your first pic

    anom: work on the middle connections between the bars of your "N" and "M"

    my turn then, first throwie in a wicked long time cause their not my strong point, crits would be good

    ai13.tinypic.com_8fxh8g9.gif
     
  8. popshots

    popshots Senior Member

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    [Broken External Image]:http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/3203/nerm38yh0.jpg


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    [Broken External Image]:http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/6323/nerm42zk2.jpg

    i like my second one and the last 1 the best the others are kinda bleh... crits..
    sledgehammer: go wayyy simpler get letter structure down b4 u go mad crazy with it
    glas: love that make all shadows acording to the ones in the circles
    ideal: start tryen to go more complex cuz youve benn doin the same simple thang for mad long

    :edited by Fube: post your flicks up and down for lack of annoyance please!
     
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  9. sex without condoms

    sex without condoms Elite Member

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  10. LikeOner

    LikeOner Senior Member

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    silent - i dont like the way you broke the letters up. instead of trying to change the structure right now just do simples but add some color, 3d, or drop shadow or something.

    glas - that looks pretty sweet, through shadow on it

    popshots - first one looks best imo. stucture seems decent, clean them up. i dont like the colors but i guess thats personal taste

    sex - i like your old name better. this stuff kinda looks goofy to me.
     
  11. 5Funerals

    5Funerals Senior Member

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    ai105.photobucket.com_albums_m223_ShanestaGangsta_DSCF0017.jpg

    ai105.photobucket.com_albums_m223_ShanestaGangsta_DSCF0015.jpg

    New Throwups cause the last one wasnt so good. I need to keep working on the T. Crits?

    Glas - That is a sick style cant wait to see flicks of that painted!
     
  12. Kool-Aid Man

    Kool-Aid Man Senior Member

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    Rast - I dont like your r and I dont think the A in your tag flows

    ai227.photobucket.com_albums_dd306_kooleraid_DSCF0557.jpg
    crits?
     
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  13. spag

    spag Senior Member

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    akes, i like your e - keep sketchin tho.
    rast- work on the s
    dehl-i like simple so i think yours is nice
    glass-i like what you're doing with the g and a, it flows nice.

    a 2 letter sticker, just a quick throw, dun worry about the cleanliness.

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    and a quickie piece. the thing on the c is messed up, don't worry about the little things, tell me if you like the concept and i'll clean it up.

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  14. glass

    glass Senior Member

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    haha thanks dim, and everyone else who gave crit

    Kool aid: good simple structure, keep it up

    popshots: i like that first pic, except that R

    rast: hahaha sorry i have to agree with sex about that T but im liking the handy in the second, simple and pretty nice
     
  15. 5Funerals

    5Funerals Senior Member

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    Ceas - I like the throw up a lot and the other one is nice too. thats really all I have to say they are pretty much good to me.
    Kool Aid Man - work on the A and the S, more so the S.
    Damn Popshots you stretched the fuck out of the thread :p
     
  16. sex without condoms

    sex without condoms Elite Member

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  17. JibbittyJabber

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  18. sketch3

    sketch3 Banned

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    use bars if ur not all ready, that k needs werk
     
  19. c0ld

    c0ld Senior Member

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    spag-i like the first one but im not feeling the other one. ty doing it in marker, itd probly look better.

    sex-not feeling the style. try doing it on paper and work on that s. the style doesnt match up.

    kwip-i really like the direction your style is going. i like the color of the first one better, but the style of the second on is better.


    heres my simp.
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    not too bad i think, considering i haven't sketched (or been here) in a while.

    crits?