what whas that done with, looks photoshopped also maybe try making your letter more simple and not so smushed
@twisties LOOKS REAL GOOD NOW DO IT ON PAPER @Edward"Sezer"Hands DONT KNO WHAT TO SAY BECAUSE UR GOOD @beyondyereyes CHANGE UR LETTERS NOT THE NAME THE LETTERS NOW FOR MINE View attachment 319495
Gettin Better Jens, How bout trying to proportionalize the letters(the same size) and changing the bottom of the S .. Heres something i tried doing in paint to help[Broken External Image]:http://xs221.xs.to/xs221/07473/JENS.JPG The Grey is to help with the Height Proportions the rest self explanitory
ehhhh they look wierd this time, buttt i havent posted in forever so here ya go. dusk and duskoner. o and one ftsk [Broken External Image]:http://aycu14.webshots.com/image/33333/2003334023213536292_rs.jpg
twisties, real dope, what did you do it with? cerex, looks alright but yuo could make the s better dusk, cant really see your letters heres one
cerex i like it, nice and simple. lots of people don't appreciate how far that can go. (second pic) pleaaaase try to make it look more like your pic on your bed that one looked sooo much better spag the marker one is much better, much more legible and much prettier. main event you've got this shit on lock, very visually appealing. i'd love to see shit like that aroudn my hood. beyondyereyes, fix the "s" and yea make the size at least a bit more proportional (second post) just keep the otek from the first just make the t and k smaller don't change the style up especially with the o, e and k sez your stuff is ALWAYS amazing, i told you a long time ago to get the fuck out of the toy forum, and the statement still stands. twisties to start lose every single arrow. i suggest working on the bottom one, a and t look good, make the b, o and u the same size and make it all fit nice together. dusk i'm sorry but i don't like your letters, your style or anything you're trying to do. not trying to hate but personally i don't even know where i'd start with the advice. enormous i really like it the letters have mad swagger new style trying to keep it pretty simple, what do you think i'd love the crits good and bad p.s i already know and it is my own opinion that the star could be better and the m could be better. other than that take it away
rast - i like the bottom one the best, get rid of the halo on top of S and make the A straight it leans into the R at the moment and maybe shorten the width of the R... do that and see how it looks... just trying to help
crits? Flash...I like it, not so much the circle at the top though. Sen....Pretty tight. Rast... Its getting there Annie... Keep it way more simple! Ekim.. I dont know much bout philly styles but looks preety sick.
yea i make it a habit to give crits to about everyone on the page before i post and some people seem to think they're the center of the universe and just want their shit noticed. bump for crits...maybe i'll get some this time
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munch i like the bottom marker one, but i would flip the bar on the H around so the line goes up then into a circle insteasd of down