nice and simple....now time to add 3d/shadow w/e u wnat and colour........ then next time step ur game up and work off that.....
if its ment to say ideal wich it wat u write? the I is too small but would mean the chopping thing aint random wich i good in one way bad in the other.
View attachment 319526 silent chaos- youre finally using bars right. not bad, i dunno about the cuts everywhere, but its not hurting the structure or anything. id probably take em out anyway tho. and too bad everyone still hates you. dream creation- i cant read it, so all i can say as of now is that the pieces coming off your letters dont look very good. also, if i cant read it, chances are you should fix up the structure or take away the clutter from some of the main structural bars. thats all. wizeeeee- dont make it so wobbly, as in the bottom of your e and z. the y could be good if it was a little wider, it looks jammed in there. make the middle of your w come up to the top or further. its too low right now. also fatten it up upon doing this. finally, lose the extentions on either side of the w, they arent for throwups. if you want, you could probably put the extention from the y on either side though, the ys extention looks more legit for a throw. if you wanna make a good throw, get rid of alot of that negative space. enormous- bacckkkk tooo simmmpplless. nice cat guy tho. mr nice- i like your k alot but the rest needs work. amk- extentions all the way through the piece are stupid as fuck. but your lettrs are sexy as fuck, so take that out and shitll be straight. everyone else on this page, simples.
tezer - dope over - dope ideal - cool i guess, maybe add some 3d on there dreamcreation - simples? wyze - looks cool, clean up yo shakey lines [Broken External Image]:http://i165.photobucket.com/albums/u55/str8gangsta_01/Picture381.jpg
Major props to garbage and ayte for that crits. I took your advice and came up with this... I think the WYE are better but something about the Z still has a grudge on me... What do you think? [Broken External Image]:http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/3756/image103023eo7.jpg
dims: that shit is hot, i like your style as well. AYTE:, im likin that a and e. dream creation: color that and post it back up, it looks nice id just kinda wanna see it with color.
skuz im not too sure about that top one but the bottom one is dope, i love the fill n it just looks nice.
skuz im not too sure about that top one but the bottom one is dope, i love the fill n it just looks nice. EDIT: fuck, sorry for tha double post
wyze - give crits to get them, the y is good and yeah your z does need work and i dont really like the e its bigger than the rest of your letters
welllll........ thanx... i've been practicing, and i havent embarassed myself yet and hit up anything xp. man everyone says do bars.... i guess man... i guess.... thankie thankie tho. ok now for some crits.... (i mean i shouldnt but i have a good eye for things i just dont have technique like a ballerina with the heart but not the feet) skuz: i like the fill on the second one.. its amazing that u did that with marker.. looks like as if its something u can only do on the computer but u pulled it off nice. u get 2 hero points.
Skuz your 2nd sketch is real fresh. The only thing I can say is maybe do your Z the same as your S but backwards... the parralellaness of it may either inhance it or ruin it...
Kool- This sketch looks the same as the others you've posted in the past..However, it is taking shape better than pervious ones..Clearer letters too which is great improvement!
skuz,i like the second one kool aid, all the letters look pretty decent, make it a lil more exciting though