cade u need simples

 

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^ Pleaseeeeeee ignore the crown on that 1
can i have some feedback on these two..there old havent sketched in a while

here they are painted

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sorry about the size =/

 

that first painted one is pretty nice. really clean cept you forgot the 3d in the s

 

bizarro -- got a solid feel to it. keep at it, even though there are small things that you gotta figure out like the crossing of the legs of the A and R, S lower left bar. got a way to go, but the simples are coming out alright.

aslos -- if you're gonna do calligraphy letters, they've gotta be clean, and they have to flow. shape em up.

spit -- work on consistency in your letters, clean up that 3d too. good concept background.

sar -- hell yeah, solid! loving the colors and cleanliness

penshit
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centimeter tall, 3 wide.
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hello mewt & sumoe influence
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wow, I dont really see many similarities between my characters and belio's...
and I wasnt influenced by him at all, my characters have always been in this style except ive started adding the tops of their heads and making them obese. My old karaks have the same features and all, they're just skinnier.

but if you think they were kinda bitten, point out where. and yeah you are entitled to your own opinion so whatever..

 

clash i like the second painted one better you have great can controll

 

thanks so far for the feedback & too kosher thanks lol im only noticing that ni..the outline & 3d was rushed tried 2 finish quick it started raining

 

some simple shit. just messing around at the bowling alley.
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sample i like the first one. the third one, the first 2 and second 2 letters don't match

 

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just an i that i coloured with some new paint pens.
crits on the i? not the colouring job

 

ideal- what the hell is that, after all the workin on structured letter, you pull that!!!! come on man
seize-nice simples man
sample- shits looking good, you should stick with the sume/mewt influence, shits ace
clash- nice simples, second one is dope
cade- simples

some simples i'm probably going to paint tonight
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clash all ur shit painted is mad clean start to sketch more so u will get better letters

 

silent chaos stick to simples with no extensions or hook ups just work on simples for a looong time

 

thanks for the comments, here is a quick simple attempt with 3d haha

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borg is the jesus of satan simples...if that makes sense

 

ive rocked simples for mad long. anyone on here can tell u that. ive been told to try new shit so i have been.

 

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You'll see improvement... hopefully. Criticism welcomed.

 

seize and borg - nice simples
aslos - not bad
here's a better pic of the earlier sketch...
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the O's are a little poor... but it's a work in progress. Something new I started trying today.