cade- very good, much improvement jers- looks good, liked the older ish more though zof- cool man, work on the flow between the f and the o captain- make all the letters the same size, i'm not too big on the bottom sketch, too much random lines that work away from the bars [Broken External Image]:http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/5255/picture007lr3.jpg simples for daws
hey borg your style is so fucking fresh and simple i love it would u sketch up either sarz or tole and post it for me i wont bite i would just love to see it cause i love your simple style would be a great help for me if you did im just trying to find a nice simple structure for my letters in these words i wont bite but it would just give me some idea for the structure of my letters and how to make my simples fresh without adding anything and just having a clean shape it would be heaps appreciated! peace
Bizzaro, you have very similar letters, my suggestion is that you try to make a difference between them Jers, RFI, Borg, Capitain, dope stuff! Props to all, esp Capitain for sharing his alphabet, although it's not in the right order Cade, shorten the block and it will look much better. Samp1e, nice work, I like it! beyondyereyes, thicknen the letters a bit and ink it, and try putting a block on the left or right, could look cooler... Nice invert seize, like the E's! I suggest you to move the letters away from each other as you're improving them because the structure will be more noticeable then...
Also, props to silentchaos for going more complicated, although it needs work, it's positive because you encouraged yourself to experiment! Koer, your r and e are ok, but do the rest of the piece in quite simpler way, it could look better, and it would be easier to do on the wall!
my man CILE is ILLEN !!! Captain..i see an huge Sample bite / influence on that S...i may be wrrong..either way the sketch is kool..looks nice.. And for all the goons who said my AMK shit is better than my new shit...who was to say i wasnt doing AMK type shit anymore eeehhhh...i was jus tryin sumthin new out.. love you. bye
satan... thats too many letters, unless ur flash n u can do everything fast... gosh.. i bet you flash was awesome with a can huh? lol.... anyways i like how ur letter are really simple and arent warped. nice and clean. its pretty. u must have really nice handwriting. sharpie makes PAINT markers?! im such a noob
its overcrowded, disconect all the letters and loose all the extensions, then fatten up ur letters a lil bit
the toy tags thread dont get enough heat so w.e shit for my nuggah potatoe there was more. ignore the shitty ass piece with all the yucky dot connections.
find me a pic. I didn't bite anything, but I wouldn't doubt that it's similar to something. There are only so many ways to do a letter, it's not impossible to see the same thing twice. oh and thanks to the two people who gave a crit/comment. but really, use pics to back up a statement like that man.
[Broken External Image]:http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/2369/smezev1.png bit messi, but u should get the idea.
koer im feelin the E, the k has a few extentions that arnt needed, the o doesnt really flow, and the r is alright to. borg your simples are so ill scab feelin tha red double outs, with the black, looks good. jers still super stoked on your style, i dunno what it is, just looks good to me beyond lookin alright, try shoven those letters together. cade, good simples, try and keep those lines steady a little somethin i worked up this morning, what you all think?
hade- like the handy at the top shamee-good but the e doesnt really match sex-second to last handy is my fav. skuz-bottom part of the k is a bit too skinny i think umm so crits? arrows kinda whack i know