u wanna start some shit in the battle forum? lolz dont try i beg u.. ur nowhere near me.. u got no ups irl , u cought no lines, ppl like me better then u here and ive been here for a few days.. joke kid tryna be like bigel n shit.. u a joke dont start. u dont know my shit
If you don't want feedback don't fucking post. The S in your piece looks like it has a fucking tumor on the left side of it, and a lot of your connections and bits are mad outta place. The overall structure is pretty wierd(whats it say, Saga? The S is the only properly structured letter). The frankensteins monster theme is cool, I'm just sayin a lot of the extra junk draws the eye away from the structure. Like I said no beef man, i'm just giving you an honest opinion. Are you from Auz?
that wasnt directed to me was it..lol.. first off the comment i left wasnt to you..lol...second.. if it was to me.. i got ups.. soo .lol.. and skuz.z i was jus playin mann.. loll i know the letters are clustered a lil.. and im doin a new one.. but i aint got no beef at all.. i just like fuckin with yall heads.. .. and im form t dot
Word, I fuck with peoples heads and hate on everyone on Puregraff and now everyone there hates me, it's great. Thats crazy that your from tdot man, Your style is really reminiscent of Aussie style. Thats cool tho, we ain't far from each other.
I know ppl are gonna start bitching and accusing me of biting AR4s teeth. so if your going to just fucking do it. possible name change.
[Broken External Image]:http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/8661/photo146eu4.jpg As you may be able to tell... I got a little lazy with the background hahaha... Anyway, 2 page sketch.
Thanks mang. Yea after I did it I looked at that little part and was like wtf... why did I do that haha.
yo fella the first page in the new book.... [Broken External Image]:http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/7152/firstpage002ik2.jpg
Some quick simples... Okay so I fucked up big time on the concept I was going for on the first piece, accidentally did a line through the O and looked wrong if I didn't do it on both sides, so just ignore that. [Broken External Image]:http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/7535/pics001fn0.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/1883/pics003wa0.jpg And Some Crits Skuz - The piece is okay, there is a lot of unnecessary little extensions and strange fills in it, maybe add some color and make it looks a little cleaner...also I like the U on the K idea. Ate - Fix the A, and what the hell is that in the background? Also, the handstyle is hurting. Dial - I like it, unique style you got going on there, try it out a little more, play with it, experiment. Sex - 2,3,4,5,6,7,8 pages are dope...I'm liking them, the other pages are ehh, but then again make your shit a little smaller it might help in giving crits, shits so big can't really tell ya dig?
added some color...my markers suck but im getting some good ones. [Broken External Image]:http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/7237/colazsr9.jpg