Dusk- lose the curve. and work the K. but other than that its ok. i really dont like bombs. more of a Throw up person.and working on a different wild style. so teze if your down for ANOTHER battle. iam down. FEBES- Not feeling the S. or anyof it. but i know the updated version will look better. [Broken External Image]:http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/1416/edgind7.jpg ^^^ Your better than this. so lets see it. Sinn- Ewwy!
Captain keep workin at it definetly progressing Febs clean that shit up lookin dirty piece of shit webcam flick View attachment 321570 crits?
shitty quick rough sketch im gona make another one but cleaner and fix up the letters more n shit SIN lose the weird thing vcomin out the s febes meh i suppose its good but im not feeling it SKANT shits ill i dun like the one with the riddiculus cluster of arrows though kils u got fix the s at the end i know uve heard it already
yo BESAR MAN U FUCKING IMPROVED i havnt been on ur letters arnt great but better then when u started so keep up on the improvement
Febes, Sex Without Condoms, and Besar I'm liking what I see on the last few pages. Sinn, just work on some more simples and focus on letter structure instead of thematic imagery. Re-posting this because the only crits I got was a bump from Febes: [Broken External Image]:http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd72/nibjapmc/new.jpg I spend a lkot of time leafing through the last few pages to crit you people, I'd appreciate some crits in return.
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yea besar ur gettin hella bettr bro nasr--its cool damn my shadings ALLL FUKD UP [Broken External Image]:http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/5619/yummmmme001si6.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/1386/yummmmme002fy8.jpg
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[Broken External Image]:http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd259/electricjew/PB290085.jpg is electricjew's pic since he found a way to mess up img tags.
^^^^i wrote drone....then found out he was a dope writer....RIP drone some new shittt... [Broken External Image]:http://img413.imageshack.us/img413/8342/therest007jw6.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/6828/therest006il0.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/6828/therest006il0.bc5ece2868.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/3436/therest001kj1.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/3436/therest001kj1.dd23d26018.jpg
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EVERYONE LOOK AT THIS KID. FOLLOW HOW HE DOES. BARSBARSBARS! Drone keep this up. You'll get your simples down pat this way bby:]