ehh you need to work on them a lot. i would suggest starting off with really simple lettering and space them evenly dont worry about incorporating and together or anything fancy yet. just keep practicing
[Broken External Image]:http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b166/Sintakz/tektag.jpg Yea I agree with Rank-oner. Start writing legibly then work on cleaning up negative space and making things look good.
its starting to hit me like duh. Sintakz - I really dont feel that tag at all. The circles on the ends arent working and neither does the underline with the arrow. The letters are really close together and overlap and just not structured great so its almost impossible to read. Blam - just do simple and it will come for sure.
Blam- maybe a little simpler, not loving the tipped m. I likethe B on the first and the A on the last. Keep the name. Takz- didn't like this one much. Ease up on the extra stuff and focus on the letter form. the A shows promise.
sintaks im not sure if ur one to give advise u stuff aiint lookin so hot compared to blam either your letters seem too straight and akwardly positioned deffinately lose the arrow at the bottom and the circles aswell as the e and put more curve into some of your letters they just dont look good
dude. sintakz is expressin opinion here not braggin or w/e. that being sed, dint really feel the takz. hard to read. mayb mor curve and less cramping?
this is the first tag i did with my new on the run marker. tell me what you think. what i can change etc. ty.
ya do a D not a d and lose the circle, but all of the letters look like keyboard letter, work on flow? i know i need to too
deano: rid of that star and the circle around the letters. work on your flow, try and figure out how maybe you could do that all in one or two strokes, instead of trying to form every letter in multiple pieces. here's RES. raising every standard. rough exit strategy. on the smooth stone bench at midtown marta station. [Broken External Image]:http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/4509/resrc7.jpg
lose the arrow on the m and the squigilly line or w.e that is up top and dont put the l and i together for now until u get some better letters
I'm digging that RES. Slim I like your tag but yea, lose the arrow on your M. [Broken External Image]:http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b166/Sintakz/uploadnow.jpg I know, I know, lose the arrow. The more I look at it the more I don't like it. This one is really simple, maybe it'll be liked more and I can go from there.
Lose the arrow, lose the underline on the T, and make it so the handle of your 1 doesn't look like it continues on forever.
Do a Capital I, and lose the squiggly things above it. Don't put an arrow coming out of the m. The actual letters are lookin alright though, and you will get better with practice.
well i have changed names because blam ment nothing to me and karma really does mean some thing to me. plz give me feed back thanks.
Karma - dont make your letters all boxy, try like, writing them as simple as possible, and make your R look more like a R