yo smooth, it definately has potential and it flows.but theirs something about it that comes off as sketchy to me.probably how the curve of the d is a bit off.if it was straighter and just one nice curve it would make it alot better.and nothing pesonal, but i just dont like arrows unless you really know how to use them.these ones are nice but i like when they hve a different feel to them.work on the 3-d a little itty bit to. p.s. im a sexy beast and you know it.
oops i hear u have to give crits to get. in that case i think sezer hands shit is fairly nice but has room for growth i think roolete neads practice i think that dear is rollin along ok.but def needs practice i think danker 17's peice is nicely coloured and all, but boring
[Broken External Image]:http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg223/jackimo_bucket/DSCN2827.jpg Its my first decent throwie so i posted it Crits on it?
i see krabz...flow is good and its consistent and u fukin suk ass.jkz. the skuz, tezer and roolete stuff is banging. help please on my one liner wackness :
finished the canvas changed the peach to red [Broken External Image]:http://img378.imageshack.us/img378/9206/pic066rw7.jpgi tried postin in the big bbook thread and i got erased aha
View attachment 322615 my throwie for a battle word is slerm anddd... yeaaa crits btw it has a light orange fill the flash on my camera fucked itt..
well i dont know what ur complaining about they look super fresh to me now u wanna give me some help haha
yer.. the S in that throw could be worked on a little, that connector part above the circle in the bottom of the S is a little thin. Thats bout it.
to be honest i cant read most of the letters, but thats just me. i find that if ur doin a 1liner u shud space the letters out moreso than a normal throw, cuss it looks confusing wat with the overlapping lines
Hope you can see the letters a bit better [Broken External Image]:http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg223/jackimo_bucket/DSCN2828.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg223/jackimo_bucket/DSCN2833.jpg If you can't it says KRABZ
libre...decent....maybe define the lettring more though.. jackimo....good flow...but the letters aint as good...rehtink your structure then incorpate that type of flow then itll be a decent throw mann inside cover of my book..and front cover.. front View attachment 322630 inside. View attachment 322631 View attachment 322632 thoughts.
[Broken External Image]:http://i135.photobucket.com/albums/q158/toker_014/AnitaChildPic.jpg slerm lol i suck harry looks good lol I lost librel looks smooth to me krabz lol i like your name keep working it .
smile..the S is aight..not sure bout the others tho...try simplified basic bubble letters...doubt you will.... same for the other guy above me ^ for my man CILE. View attachment 322634 PEACE
amk, thats very nice, only thing I would change is the C other than that, I really like the colors and flow of the ILE part.. btw, what did you mean with simple bubbles? Thanks.