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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. shie-ster

    shie-ster Senior Member

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    yo smooth, it definately has potential and it flows.but theirs something about it that comes off as sketchy to me.probably how the curve of the d is a bit off.if it was straighter and just one nice curve it would make it alot better.and nothing pesonal, but i just dont like arrows unless you really know how to use them.these ones are nice but i like when they hve a different feel to them.work on the 3-d a little itty bit to.
    p.s. im a sexy beast and you know it.:D :D :D
     
  2. RUP'E

    RUP'E Senior Member

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    im guessing this def belongs here crits?
     
  3. RUP'E

    RUP'E Senior Member

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    oops i hear u have to give crits to get.
    in that case
    i think sezer hands shit is fairly nice but has room for growth
    i think roolete neads practice
    i think that dear is rollin along ok.but def needs practice
    i think danker 17's peice is nicely coloured and all, but boring
     
  4. nekid

    nekid Member

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    sezer.....i like your style.
     
  5. jackimo

    jackimo New Member

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  6. mas$

    mas$ Elite Member

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    whats it say?
    keeez?
    its kl got a nice flo, i cant read it tho:(
     
  7. librelikespie

    librelikespie Senior Member

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    i see krabz...flow is good and its consistent and u fukin suk ass.jkz.
    the skuz, tezer and roolete stuff is banging.
    help please on my one liner wackness :( :
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  8. mas$

    mas$ Elite Member

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  9. harry

    harry Senior Member

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    my throwie for a battle word is slerm anddd... yeaaa crits btw it has a light orange fill the flash on my camera fucked itt..
     
  10. librelikespie

    librelikespie Senior Member

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    halp :(
     
  11. harry

    harry Senior Member

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    well i dont know what ur complaining about they look super fresh to me now u wanna give me some help haha
     
  12. librelikespie

    librelikespie Senior Member

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    yer.. the S in that throw could be worked on a little, that connector part above the circle in the bottom of the S is a little thin. Thats bout it.
     
  13. sketch3

    sketch3 Banned

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    to be honest i cant read most of the letters, but thats just me.

    i find that if ur doin a 1liner u shud space the letters out moreso than a normal throw,
    cuss it looks confusing wat with the overlapping lines
     
  14. jackimo

    jackimo New Member

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  15. mas$

    mas$ Elite Member

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    Krabz, move the dots around, make the R and B look better it will:p
     
  16. amk

    amk Elite Member

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    libre...decent....maybe define the lettring more though..
    jackimo....good flow...but the letters aint as good...rehtink your structure then incorpate that type of flow then itll be a decent throw mann

    inside cover of my book..and front cover..

    front

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    inside.

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    thoughts.
     
  17. smile_

    smile_ Senior Member

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    d
     
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  18. Tokenkaligreens

    Tokenkaligreens Elite Member

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  19. amk

    amk Elite Member

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    smile..the S is aight..not sure bout the others tho...try simplified basic bubble letters...doubt you will....

    same for the other guy above me ^


    for my man CILE.

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    PEACE
     
  20. smile_

    smile_ Senior Member

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    amk, thats very nice, only thing I would change is the C other than that, I really like the colors and flow of the ILE part..


    btw, what did you mean with simple bubbles? Thanks.