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Freestyle Rapping

Discussion in 'General Discussion' started by fame, Nov 6, 2004.

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  1. Dondii

    Dondii Member

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    Intellect shows respect for yourself with rhymes shown in text,
    Maste embarrased himself, he's gone to waste like bit.chees/bitches that get's x'd.
    Monor and sketch 3? your supposed to know mc?
    Your rhyme miss punches like classic fight movies but no Bruce Lee.
    Better get some spice and spit it out to add some flavour,
    take my advice, quit rappin' and that rapshit behaviour.
    you cant master the words on paper like deaf blind poets,
    If you really wanna drop some shit, drop that rhyme down the toilets.
    You aint got the rhymeskills, you miss flow like wind but no mills,
    Your an druggie without pills, desperate but cant get it real.

    the execution:

    Splatter your brain to show the world what it contain,
    no idea's, just an dead rapper that was destined to get slain.
     
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  2. MonoR

    MonoR Banned

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    you don’t even exist in my life, so why you keep talking to me like a fag
     
  3. Dondii

    Dondii Member

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    its an fuckin freestyle thread you moron, if you where an suicidal emo-faggot you shouldnt have dropped anything. Now, go cry to your mother and tell her what the badguy just told you, fuckface..

    I'll execute any mc that think their better than me..
     
  4. bit.CHEEZ

    bit.CHEEZ Senior Member

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    wtf tu mniaise monor... tu sais pa ske c une fuckin structure
    tk jtexplike mais OSTI ke c pitoyable


    tu dois garder un meme nombre de syllable par phrase pour donner un flow a ton text

    i eat peanut
    u are a cunt
     
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  5. MonoR

    MonoR Banned

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    je c ckoi une structure
    jvoulais un example, mais merci pareil le dur
     
  6. La Coka Nostra

    La Coka Nostra Elite Member

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    i eat peanut?
    what the fuck is going on in here?
     
  7. yo, a new look on life
    dont hold anger, furry or strif
    life is short, live it up
    youll look back and wich you haddent given shit up
    love live and paint is how my days go by
    be cool, be chill, and be fly
    chillen with the fam is how it goes
    dont leand out trust to nappy headed hoes
    thell fuck you over and its too late
    next thing ya know you gotta look out for one more foe



    lame^
     
  8. Oink.

    Oink. Elite Member

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    Monor your shits recited and recycled like greenpeace
    toy can paint a burnin piece, Lyrics inner release
    To broke album on lease/ dispersed your hurse 6feet under
    known world wide as that boy wonder'/ off the tops
    like girls on springbreak' /////////your a faggot.

    Write your writtens and come freestyle and get burnt, Talk so much shit but aint got no flow fuck monor.
     
  9. bit.CHEEZ

    bit.CHEEZ Senior Member

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    si tu lsavais pk ta aucune structure dans tes shit
     
  10. Passleoinj

    Passleoinj Banned

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    motherfuckers like you should be rappin
    should take notes before you bitches open they mouth , no more spittin ,
    monor and me , the 2 official brothers in this league
    none of yall can beat up my team
    we incredibles , just like in the cartoon scenes
    youse all shemale looking rappers doing their things for cream
    you want cream mutherfucka i could cum in your face like a laser beam
    bring it on kids , you anorexic chickens cant beat on the ace
    with the walter PPK , irradicate you weak mc's in this day from this planet earth
    your mom shouldnt have given birth , cause where you belung is in the dirt
    fuckin jerk , this shit is so easy i have bitches be lining up to please me
    bitch tease me , kill me cause i'Ll never stop speaking
    annihilate your self esteem , cause im in the party , and there aint no leaving

    fuck you all , i dont do generalization.
     
  11. bit.CHEEZ

    bit.CHEEZ Senior Member

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    basically.. this is an example of a non structured, therefore non existant flow text

    plus he write like 20 words sentences long with no double rhyme..
     
  12. Passleoinj

    Passleoinj Banned

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    kiddos , you shouldnt have came up in here , you guys are fuckin precs
    i got each one of you bitches wanting to touch my pecs
    im the best , dont cry if i hit too hard on that chest
    flex it , or die with it cause in dck we playas never get tested
    cant get rid of me im crazy glue , the effect of a crazy flu
    lazy crew , fuck you you got kicked out of blood's so you go rep the blue
    leave you with no clue , im so smooth when im coming at you
    lookin at you , motherfuckers dont try to run when im running at you
    you make me puke , that shit so nasty you dont spit you vomit
    my sperm is prettier than that shit , so give me the mic imma hit it
    kick it bitch imma kill hit , i hit so hard on that thing they say i rape it
    see my words in the air , go take a flick , or take notes with your bic
    i stomp on your click , make you all love to suck my dick
    you vacuum cleaners , but you aint picking any shit
    youre spreading it all over the place , just like i do with that blood on your shirt
    in your bitch imma insert , a new child from montreal she'S gonna give birth.

    ten veut des double rhymes ,
    ma ten crisser dans L,cul fuckin toy de marde
    va dont chier ailleurs ostie on a jamais vu d'tes truc a montreal
    so arrete de parler comme si tetais bon ptit merdeux d'chiasse
    on le sait K,ta rien a dire , ktes laid pis kta rien a nous donner poufiasse
    so fuck man , ferme ta fuckin gueule next time jsuis tellement fuckin tanner davoir a tengueuler
    yo stu pense ke ste jviens de te dire c un freestyle bin fuck you stait juste la vérité
    yo tu me stress a chaque fuckin fois touvre ta crisse de trappe
    parce que tout ske tu raconte c dla marde
    tes ou dans lstreet le comique ,
    tes plus present dans un show dhumoriste que dans ske tu parle
    tes une joke vivante si au moins tes shit pouvait appuyer tes paroles
    jte prendrais ptetre au serieux mais pour le moment tu dois sniffer dla colle
    tes une folle genre une politicienne c koi taime ca te faire regulate?
    jen ai tellement rien a foutre de ske tu jappe, au quebec on dit sen crisser
    so decalisse dicite ostie d'anglais , parce que ici c'est DCK
     
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  13. bit.CHEEZ

    bit.CHEEZ Senior Member

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    ok after like 6 minutes heres what i got

    motherfuckers like you should be rappin
    Don’t call me motherfucker, not my fault if she was stripping

    should take notes before you bitches open they mouth , no more spittin ,
    too much notes on ur hand, next time u spit make sure ure not sitting,

    monor and me , the 2 official brothers in this league

    You' guys so official, last time i checked ur dads were pig,

    none of yall can beat up my team
    No duh, you guys are stuckd behind ur screen

    we incredibles , just like in the cartoon scenes

    in fact when i see u spit u sound like mr bean

    youre all shemale looking rappers doing their things for cream
    last time i chekd ur ipod for c.r.e.a.m. all I found was gay porno film

    you want cream mutherfucka i could cum in your face like a laser beam
    you need to lubricate your ass, last time Monor checkd, there was a steam

    bring it on kids , you anorexic chickens cant beat on the ace

    no actions take place. All u do all weekends is watching scarface

    with the walter PPK , irradicate you weak mc's in this day from this planet earth
    knife in my hand, ull scream like ur mom when she saw ur face at ur birth

    your mom shouldnt have given birth , cause where you belung is in the dirt
    I cant believe u're alive, ur dad mustve been dead drunk to take ur mom for a flirt

    fuckin jerk , this shit is so easy i have bitches be lining up to please me
    Your words are weak, stop acting like a pussy, youre fronting with a grizlis

    bitch tease me , kill me cause i'Ll never stop speaking
    Get that ball back in ur mouth, or ill have to start kicking

    annihilate your self esteem , cause im in the party , and there aint no leaving

    Get yourself a new team, cause all I see are two tardies making bombingscience their living
     
  14. bit.CHEEZ

    bit.CHEEZ Senior Member

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    structuring his lines more than he does.. wow.
     
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  15. meetermaid

    meetermaid Elite Member

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    alright listen up cheese whiz none of us' got time for this
    i'm so hardcore i freestyle to antony and the johnsons' version of knockin on heavens door
    and what's more, i'm about to settle the score
    there's not many in here that're alright, let alone worthy of the spotlight
    like "oh i'm so hard, my rhyme\s right i'ma be in the limelight"
    bullshit, you know how hard it is to make it while spittin?
    a short while in the industry'll have you beggin to quit
    sucking dicks for laundry scratch
    stealin clothes from the laundromat
    but what do i know, i'm blazed as fuck and talking out my ass
    listening to portishead gotta make this bowl last
    cause that's the last of it, no more till the next paycheck
    sleepless nights having me fucked up like a trainwreck
    breathin deep on the other end of the stethoscope,
    scared of the doctor they're not fond of the false hope
    survival of the fittest, the weaker can just moan and mope
    around the house, afraid cause you just found the one louse
    where\d the other 300 go? too late can't wait i'll figure it out after the show

    fuuuuuuuuuuuuuck
     
  16. garbage down tha way

    garbage down tha way Elite Member

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    these kids are bitin so much shit that cats'd think that they teethin
    im rhymin for reason while yall paintin spots that nobodys seein
    but you best be believin me, for this im thankin yall evenly
    personally calling the buff squad to come clean the scene for me.
    duck into the shelters, im droppin bombs like im atomic
    and if you cant flip styles, they'll hire you at dennys flippin omelettes
    most cleveland cats are cowards so they packin shit but OVER aint.
    ill pistol whip you with your own piece then pawn that shit for paint
     
  17. Maste

    Maste Senior Member

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    check my resume ive been rhyming for three days
    got a flow that could match g down the way
    now listen to what ive got to say
    you all preach the same lesson and its allready heard
    if you didnt know by now your all fuckin ubsurd
    some of you kick a good flow and i respect you
    casue you tell it. but what other kids do
    you could never sell it for a cent or a penny
    your a dime a dozen and no thats not many
    im not pumping myself up um putting you all down
    but read these words and say i dont have a nice sound

    haha im so wack...least im not the wackest
     
  18. Oink.

    Oink. Elite Member

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    i spit non existant, persistant cant resist it
    stay lifted 6 storys high-rise above the rest
    honorable mention your shits bronze at best
    preschool styles locked in detention
    get out the game still waitin for pention
    patition your army, battle axes and swords cant harm me
    FUCK MONOR AND THAT OTHER GUY.


    ahahaha all <3's.
     
  19. Oink.

    Oink. Elite Member

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    \\ illiteriate ilogics modern science project
    its bound reject/perfect interesting
    insecks logeded in many of necks
    so whoooos next'/
    Letters of unsent editers frail handed
    check preditors dysect select dept collect/
    money hungry monstas'taunt and hauntcha
    simply more known the cancer
    a hidden truth hides the answer/found it sir//
    discuss battle tatitics while raising the taxes
    Get the money tree with axis axes
     
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  20. -Last-

    -Last- Elite Member

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    yea you're all killas...you kill with words