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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.

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  1. denaaa

    denaaa Senior Member

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    the new one is pretty sick its still simple but has a little more style then the simpler one

    do you have any crits for my stuff ^^
     
  2. lololzheffer

    lololzheffer Senior Member

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    i left critz yoh. just under i double posted cause im an asshole.
     
  3. diabolik

    diabolik New Member

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    Reck definatley go with your old handstyle.
     
  4. lololzheffer

    lololzheffer Senior Member

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    memz- its missing something. add something cool. but nothing toy yuh know?
     
  5. anemptyswishersweet

    anemptyswishersweet Senior Member

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  6. lololzheffer

    lololzheffer Senior Member

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    thats pretty tight apok. the only thing i i oculd say is to make all your letters the same size. the o is kidna small but it flows so idk?
     
  7. anemptyswishersweet

    anemptyswishersweet Senior Member

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    thanks man. and yeah that just how it comes out a lot of the time. i keep a consistent one line, thats my flow technique.
     
  8. lololzheffer

    lololzheffer Senior Member

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    looks tight but i know what your saying about how it jsut comes out sketchy. fuckin pisses me off.
     
  9. 5Funerals

    5Funerals Senior Member

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    Diabolik - I like the second one.
    Apok - the one with the star in the loop is my favorite.
    APER - a while back you had a tag with a curl at the end of the R. I liked it a lot then someone told you to change it and you did and now its not as good. If you like it that way its fine but dont take abosuletely all crits and apply them to your work because in the end its what looks good to you.
     
  10. MUSEone

    MUSEone Elite Member

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  11. Kwis

    Kwis New Member

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    Hey man, I've had this for a while


    [Broken External Image]:http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/9751/tagtu5.th.jpg






    Check the T.
     
  12. Sintakz

    Sintakz Elite Member

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    Lol. PLENTY of writers have had that since before you OR me started using it. That is a classic New York style T. At any rate, sorry for the big picture but I am starting to write a secondary name just to get good with it in case I decide to switch. What do you think about the tag?
    [Broken External Image]:http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/4668/img1335fw1.jpg
     
  13. Kwis

    Kwis New Member

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    Oh word, I've only seen the T one other time and it was in San Franny, but whatevs call me an ass if you want, AND no one told me how mine was!
    Sinkaz- Drop the quotes and try to make it flow mo'
     
  14. lololzheffer

    lololzheffer Senior Member

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    muse-that handy is bangin. flows so good.
    sinkaz- you dont need to drop the quoties. just kick a little more flow in the letters. but the letters are really good.
     
  15. danker17

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  16. MainEvent

    MainEvent Senior Member

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  17. st_nahpele_egnaro

    st_nahpele_egnaro Senior Member

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  18. KASE2

    KASE2 Senior Member

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    my boy rites NEMS, ur 1 flow is similiar

     
  19. lololzheffer

    lololzheffer Senior Member

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    hi cror!:)- the gren one flows so nice.
     
  20. "Riot"

    "Riot" Elite Member

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