dope DIM..work on that R though mate

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and for fuck sake...can people stop sayin my " older style " is better etc blah...what makes you guys think i aint still gonna rock it...people on here dont like CHANGE.!

 

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go simpler, lose the top part on the S and the bottom part of the K

 

dimr that one of your best man
amk thats sik i like the new style

 

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Fucking around with a new style

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I loved the last one so much i didz another onez!!!!11!

Shak-The simples fine just make the S fit into the rest of the letters.Right now its pretty huge and ruins the flow.

Mass-You know what I think.

Dimr-To be honest I don't feel your style.I dont really like the wavy bars and the arrows dont fit in.I suppose you should do your thing though as everyone else seems to like it.

Sen-All the letters are dope but the S doesnt flow with the EN.The EN is going one way and the S is going the other.Just keep trying out different flows each time till you get it perfect.

Sone-Sick simple!Everythings right.

Fasho-Nice simple aswell.I like to see typography every now an then.

Knews-Dope comeback.

 

gettin a gully style, looks like 90s london fam

 

that shits sick seize
and yeah i know my usernames gay i didnt know u cant change it later hahaha

dimr - im feelin that yo

drakula - i love the top one thats so sick and the bottom looks good too but you should really resize ur pics i had to scroll down and over to get to the letters on the bottom one
plus resizing them makes'em look cleaner too

 

fucked up and not finishing this.




not done

 

Nice simple lettering on both, you should start to complicate them just a wee bit until you get use to that type of letter then complicate it even more till it looks awesome.

 

FASHO them simples are so sex man im not feeling the F if u can change it do it but its fine like it is

sex without condoms nothing i can say love your style

ne ways just did this now a tiny simple i did
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some stuff

 

BAUM - You need to learn about letter structure and about bars. Go to the new to graff thread.

 

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frost not done with it
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ignore the background


sex- your shit is bangin
fasho-keep workin on them simples clean....
baum-i agree with 5funerals
haze-work on it a lot
amk-lovin it

 

sick- with all respect...the fisrt one is just nasty sry man but at least u trying so keep it up and u get it.the second one you look like you got the idea,but shit is sloopy clean it up

 

k frost dude u need to do way more simples homie and clean it up props for the colour scheme on the second but dude its really sloppy u should do sum simps

 

baum: use bars nd dont color your ish in yet
Ras: not fellen your peice at all i like a lot of your old ish more than this 1... try sumthen diffrent with those extension nd i dont relly like da curly thing on da right of da O

 

first entry into my new blackbook. first time trying to use the prisma "mixer" i still dont understand how to use it but oh well. crits please!!