YO im starting up! haha Hey hey hey, Im writer from regina, Taiko is the tag and im just getting into wildstyle, im not very good but i thought id post something so i could get some feedback and tips
yea, calm down wit tha posts, its good use of bars, the structure is good, but make the bars the same thickness, like i sed, peep ciles stuff an see how he makes bars
sez- not bad, all your sketches are kinda repetitive, and a bit rushed, i would take your lettering back just a bit, keyboard style, and spend a little more time on it, perfecting all the mistakes as much possible, flow isn't bad, work on keepin the bars the same size, like the bottom of the k where it flairs out, not feelin' it
I love those EYKS CNK and Atlok, really good, but maybe a little too much bad flick, I think this came out good though.
Mexico dude- i don't know but i think theres just too much going on there.. [Broken External Image]:http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/7705/dscn4335yh2.jpg I'm trying.. eh
ake - that`s mad hot, but tons of kids write aker, i duno why it seems to be quite the popular name, i`d rethink it. the style is what i love to see, although the r looks a lil too thick compared to the rest of the letters. jask - the throw at the bottom ofthe page, in pencil, is beautiful, fuck the green one go with the other one mexico - chill on the colours, it detracts from the throw absolutely and it`s totally confusing. fills are fun but untill you get a good sense of what works and what doesn`t, and good letter structure, don`t bother spending too much time on it, letter structure`s what you should be focusing on and not nutso fills. atlok - the t`s hot, the other letters are pretty iffy tho. the style`s a little confusing, but it looks like it could be sick if you calmed it down a bit, and maybe didn`t squish in the letters so much, give em all a lil room to breathe. sex - you already know it, i love you :_ edit: what the fuck is wrong with my keyboard my apostrophes dont usually look like ass..
workin on this charac haha yeah hes supposed to look tweaked out like that neuro - fuck yeah man i love that style yo atlok - that shit looks sick but all i can see is the a and the k aker - that shit looks good as hell but yeah the r is spread wider than the rest of your letters
dying to live: like the letters not feelin the K as much, but did you get my pm a while back on that throwie
seize, love the fill on the letters flasho, nice kinda anime style i dig it not graffiti style but somethin i did says MELISSA we already talked about this and i have gone simpler [Broken External Image]:http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p88/royaltykustomz/pics-2.jpg