new shit-

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crits

 

Bazer: im likin that R alot but how come the E is lower case?
FATTTY: without a bottom i cant tell what it says might have potential but give crits to get them
SAme: lookin real good. likin the simps
And i dont see anything alike in that painted piece to Cher but the top of the E and thats about it.
Maze: i like what your coming up with but i think the Z could use a little work on being more defined as a Z but i like that throw style a lot

 

Nice stuff a maze, the drop shadow on your tear is a little odd looking though. not a big deal.

The letters are hot.

@Same, I like the first simple, just make all the letters the same size ans touch up the right side of the A (make the right leg longer) and the start of the M. (make the left leg less rounded)
Edit, maybe make the prongs on the E deeper.

Bumpity because I'd like a few critz if anyone has any for me.

 

Rank- yeah, I get what you're sayin about the z, have any suggestions on how I could fit it?

 

woah shit my e is like exactly like his. ive never even seen this before. where is this guy?

 

yours is better who cares^^^hahaha

 

Maze well this is sketch as shit cause i just did a quick idea and i cant do your style but maybe this will give you some ideas or something
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and Roolete his Top part is but so many people use that shape E with it curving up on the bottom bar and even that and your middle bar is different

 

rank sry to say i cant read that throw try somethin more simple
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crits?

 

EVA; that shit looks tight, but i think you should lose the "snaketail"
SAme; i like that second one alot maybe make a bit more background with that blue??

some shit i draw at school crits??
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reminds me of those black and pink boxes of camels. i like it.

 

http://img408.imageshack.us/my.php?image=latestshitlk6.jpg


Eat it......Choke on it

 

-c.n.k: Nice letter and coulours, nice charr. Exellent!
-STAR01: I feell ya, that shit is ill
-BlackBookCook420: Do not feel the coulours... But the letters are ill!
-RemoZ: I feel ya coulours and all.

This is just some shit i did:[Broken External Image]:http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/8471/dsc01966nz4.jpg

 

I got a problem with that hahah im colorblind...

 

Haha Carbon your colors are worse. I think you should go to the new to graff thread because its very very helpful. It will teach you all about bars and letter structure and simples. You should be drawing was simpler things and dont bother coloring yet because letters should come first.

 

hes from toronto, and sez your a moron

 

Word Up Brotha

 

i'm gonna ignore this before you turn it into another one of
your gay ebitch fights

 

how about you just stay in this thread till your not such a fucking toy, come out when u dont suck so badly