i dont see shit either, juts because its complicated doesnt mean it doesnt have to have structure and be unreadable, mosez - not fond of the e at all bring your o out abit too, could kinda look like a d geks keep with the simples, they will pay off eventuallly azteka, i like that man, the s is kinda lacking tho over - doppe throw, peice is illin too shitty ass pen fresstyle crits ? [Broken External Image]:http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/9814/dsc00435cr6.jpg
something like this would be better, imo. i suck at Ms and Zs anyhow but w.e [Broken External Image]:http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/3640/174609vk9.jpg
yeah, I'm still working on it, thanks for the maze pic, btw. seyar- s is too small, work on simples and lose extensions.
seyar- i like your style alot, only things with that is the y looks a bit skinny, the horizontal bar on the bottom of it is kinda random, and the r could have some more steez. dope tho, keep it up. sex- that z is fire azteka- that piece is hot, only thing is that the extentions on the s get kinda tangled up in eachother. amaze- same thing everyones saying, i cant read it. mozes- keep your bars proportional and make the letters the same height.
whyd u jus put eva? i like the evade at the top but try diff colors and get rid of the weird black and green thing at bottom and the dying in your arms thing
dont like this but, i took the time doin it so blah. [Broken External Image]:http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/12.jpg
gettin there evade, the u and a need serious work but the e has potential! everybody always tellin me i never do simples [Broken External Image]:http://fc02.deviantart.com/fs24/i/2008/012/0/4/no_north_south_or_eastsiders___by_bigel.jpg
the R in elzers weak biggg, but the rest of the shit is hype, feelin the Z alot, and your throwups are off the chain as usual.. first sketch in a while..go easy on me.trying out a new style...and yes i know the colouring got fucked up..my scanners ultra sensitive... exchange with AMK: [Broken External Image]:http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/8381/img003ob4.jpg
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i got 2 rough sketches of a throw im workin on. crits? tryin to figure out if im goin in a good direction with it. btw. i write hazmat
crits wuld be great plz n thnx my first sketch piece i have done in the 3yrs ive been into the game for. mainly a bomber but time to try some pieces i guess but ya crits wuld be killer [Broken External Image]:http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/5649/1003291uy4.jpg thnx
^^^yeah i knw what you mean, i'm also not much of a piecer, go simpler and use bars to make your letters