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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. SLEDGEHAMMER

    SLEDGEHAMMER Senior Member

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  2. sketch3

    sketch3 Banned

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    watever man, i havent posted in ages cuss my scanners broken,
    im not even gunna continue this by dissing ur letters cuss that peice speaks for itself,
    crits- ur overall structer needs werk, u need to take off the ugly extensions, and make sure all the bars are the same width
     
  3. eksgi

    eksgi Member

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    Feelin These.
     
  4. SLEDGEHAMMER

    SLEDGEHAMMER Senior Member

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    As i said that was freestyled and the difference between me and you is I paint, i could paint that and alter the structure , lose the extensions , make it decent. I couldnt care less about a sketch , i sketch for a couple of minutes just for the shape of my letters. Graffiti is about painting , hardly anuyone who's dissin my shit doesnt even paint or has no can control so fuck you all fuck bs im not going to waste my time coming on here with you fags who think you know everything. Get off your little computer chair where you have protection from the real world, where you can front and act"cool" and go paint, go to a yard do something you bunch of fags you all make me sick. Forming your gay little alliances to try and get one up, my message to all the toys who want to learn out there is not to come on here because half the wankers giving crits are just as bad as you, they know nothing. Produce your style your'self, no fag on the internet saying GO SIMPLE is gunna help that, fuck them if you like your letters stick with it. Fuck sketch , fuck maze , fuck all you overhyped wankers go and paint and i may respect you a little.

    GRAFFIT IS NOT SITTING BEHIND A COMPUTER DRAWING YOUR LITTLE WHACK SKETCHES ON PAPER WAITING FOR YOUR MATE TO COME AND TONGUE YOUR ASS, ITS ABOUT GETTING UP, GETTING OUT <, LETTING EVERYONE BREATHE YOUR NAME. IM UP ALL OVER MY ENDS , YOU FAGS HAVE ALOT TO LEARN.
     
  5. sketch3

    sketch3 Banned

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    yea but wat u paint is weak, i used to paint wen i ws starting out,
    then i realised noone wants to see wack shit up on a wall,
    so wen my letter are good enuff and im not swamped with college shit ill start getting up again, i feel it for ur ends.. also i dont have to be good to know ur swag, cumon bruv remember chalk? u think ur better than u are
     
  6. SLEDGEHAMMER

    SLEDGEHAMMER Senior Member

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    Chalk was months ago, you havent seen my painted shit fool, youve seen old legals from before i battled chalk, you know nothing.

    So your gunna sit at home with your little notebook until your DOPE" haha.
    your a joke.
     
  7. sex without condoms

    sex without condoms Elite Member

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    chalk could burn you then sledge and he can now
     
  8. sketch3

    sketch3 Banned

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    not untill im dope, just until im hapy with my letters,
    im gunna start wen i leave college in 2 years, by then i should be happy with my style
    edit stop pming me, stop replying after this, i dont care about u enuff to type anything more about u.
    and e beef is silly, also real beef over cooments on the internet is silly
     
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  9. SEIZE [reppin yo hood]

    SEIZE [reppin yo hood] Elite Member

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  10. sex without condoms

    sex without condoms Elite Member

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    so steein my mang

    dopeness, go to the adult blackbook thread nigg
     
  11. sketch3

    sketch3 Banned

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    its going places, i think the last e could use alil more xtensions,
     
  12. SLEDGEHAMMER

    SLEDGEHAMMER Senior Member

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    I never said he wouldnt.
     
  13. South-Pole

    South-Pole Elite Member

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  14. hazetheone

    hazetheone Elite Member

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    hunting-looks realy nice keep it up man
    mass-beautiful as usual
    south pole-looks nice man
    sledge-do simples i dont care how long you have been writing
    seize -i like that a lot man nice three d and good colors
    wrk in progress
    ai1.tinypic.com_6qc3hon.gif
    i fucked up the one i drew last night i spilled kool aid on it so yea sorry
     
  15. the.sate

    the.sate Senior Member

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  16. Captain

    Captain Senior Member

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    19 posts and six pictures. doesn't matter if "you're graffiti" or not, you're ALL a bunch of cunts for arguing it. see picture -> post crit -> post picture -> recieve crit.

    Whether you realize it or not you're dickriding each other blindfolded by prolonging this argument. Christ I'm actually thinking about applying for a moderation account just so I can go through and erase all your shit. It seems like there's no serious modding in here anymore, no real improvement, because everyone's too busy comparing internet-dick-size.

    crits:::::
    Seize, some of your bars bend in on both sides, fix that, and work on fitting the letters together some more. Right now you got structure to a degree, but you're not doin anything with it. Oh, and drop those wrapped-around-the-letter extensions.

    sex, the stuff someone bumped looks nice, but like I said before, It's time you stop fucking around and delve into a new, or at least more developed style. Keep this shit in your bag, just add more.

    Sledge- Drop extensions, and thicken + make your bars more consistent. Spend more time on the sketch, it'll improve that last part pretty quick I bet.

    Southpole- I actually like the stars fill. Develop that style of letters some more, the other letters are a bit simple for you considering that sketch. (simples are good, but not the same as a fully-developed style.)

    Ras- Same thing as sex (though frankly I like his style a bit more. Personal opinion etc etc.) You hit a point with your letters awhile back and decided you were gonna get coloring, lining and extensions down. You did, and haven't improved since. Drop the letters you've got going now and this Lean-Each-Letter-The-Same-Way shit. It doesn't really flow as much as everyone has been giving you credit for.

    Hunting, The bottom bar of the E is ruining flow, and the S doesn't really fit the R much, It breaks the flow. Otherwise, just develop the overall look a bit more and you're on the right track.

    The state- no coloring for you for a little while. Seriously, don't bother for awhile, get a bunch of structure practice in. The R decent, the S is too, but I don't know what the fuck those other letters are. Structure, bruther. Lose that arrow off the S too.

    Haze, Start bending your letters together a little more for some flow, and find a way to stop that Z from raping the A so hard. Something like this maybe:
    [Broken External Image]:http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/7301/lolju5.jpg

    don't go overboard with that idea though.
    honest crits.
     
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  17. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    sate, keep your letters the same size, you may want to come up with a new A cuz that ones whack. the E ruins the flow, angle it more to the left. i dont really like your fill. the purple looks good with the red, the red looks good with the green. but the purple and the green dont mix well
     
  18. the.sate

    the.sate Senior Member

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    respeks for the crits, i kno my color scheme is wack along wit my a-e. was tryin somethin new plus i only got limited colors. def need some structure prac.
     
  19. a maze

    a maze Banned

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    bumping this, fucking hot for first time extensions.
     
  20. silentchaos14

    silentchaos14 Elite Member

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    seize- for first time extensions that is nice but the curly things on the S and Z makes em look a little weird.

    ai186.photobucket.com_albums_x65_silentchaos14_MO.jpg
    first sketch in a long time, didnt finish because i couldnt get an R to fit.