Yeah I understand that [all of it]. I just get pissed when I see someone with potential getting no attention because someone beefs their pic back a page. Giving crits I do because I believe in practicing what I preach. Whatever man, it's chill. I was just trying to be constructive instead of the usual "OHLOLOLZGAWDICAME" response. stolen- new to graff. Work on making some kind of improvement, don't just sketch to post. stinkaz- work on that last letter, it doesn't fit/ I can't tell what it is. Renegade- nice simples, try overlapping them a little and bending bars to achieve some basic flow. Bohemian- sexy shit man, your style reminds me of someone else on here (not a bite/overinfluence etc.) Did you have a different name before? Do a piece with the quality letter in the second pic. Rank- new to graff thread. silent- sex throws. revid- lose some of the extensions. The L looked like a z at first, and the first O looked like a lowercase E. lope- even the simple looks pretty whack, sorry. Right now you're varying the bars' thicknesses too much. try toning that down a little bit and smoothing out the bars a little.
looked much better simple... [Broken External Image]:http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii37/comatoastoner/100_0223.jpg
Happy Birthday Seize! I wanted to do a quick sketch (30 min) but i fucked up the spelling. pretty sloppy but whatever happy bday man. Also Captian : all those letters were created with bars and the only variance is a little on the K and the Top on the N. I said i didnt like it and i was trying to go for connecting. so heres some other stuff to show i know my structure
Rank- Yeah that stuff is good. That whole connect-the-ends-of-the-letters thing just never works out, and I've seen a lot of new people do it. Anyway, try developing the fat letters on the sticker. [just for clarification, when I say new to graff to someone I don't mean it as an insult. I mean literally, refer to the new to graff thread for guidance] stink- as for the K just try doing a normal k with rounded edges and eliminate some of the negative space.
yea i thought the R and A of that piece looked ok but didnt like the N and K but thanks man and ill do what i can with that sticker
heres this lil one liner 2 letter from super late last night [Broken External Image]:http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/8144/cimg0066ry3.jpg eh i like it....
revid - lower the point on the top of the O a bit so its similar to the point on the L [Broken External Image]:http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/7176/bels4tg9.jpg
ride with these..seriously dope and Captain..i know your giving crits and shit like that..but i think your misleading some people..i mean...tellin RANK to go to the new 2 graff thread is rediculous.
yeah ill agree with mass here, there's plenty of others that should visit that thread before rank.. rank your shits dope, the only thing im not entirely feeling is the thin bars in some of your work. but thats just my opinion
And AMK better not stop anything he's doing. He's got that mad flow Jetpack: i know you have potential i've seen your old throws, why did you change it up so much. I'm not feelin those b's or S's at all. i think on your throws you posted last time the E would be decent if you worked on it. Im not saying go with anything stereotypical but just letting you know i think you should keep sketching to find your throw. keep it up though man oh and much thanks to everyone who gave me crits!!!
thanks for the crits captain. anyone else? isn't this the toy thread... where you go to get crits (not just props to the ones you like)... i think the give to get em policy should be used a bit more. jetpack those throws are solid but the S doesnt flow wit the other letters. try changin it up a little bit rank- good simples definitely keep evolvin that style i looked at those pieces i put up last night and theyre garbage for sure. heres a simple i like it but its too generic. gonna try to develop this. [Broken External Image]:http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii37/comatoastoner/100_0227.jpg