go here!
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?t=2185

it will help you

 

I know the whole thing sucked but I wanted to try some colors....should i forget doing color for now too?

 

^i'd say take a look at the new to graff thread

 

new stuff...

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Thanks for the crits, going to go for a self-bump for ideas on how to change my "I." Strange word I know, it's my girlfriends name "mizue" and i'm just not feeling that letter. Ideas appreciated!!!11

 

uhm, i wud say put a kink half way through it?

 

LO all! finally bothered to register thought id post some shit i done waht ya think
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mxman - Not really feeling the M and I, but the rest of the letters are pretty good.

pureemotion - You seem to have a good concept of basics, decent pieces you posted up. Would like to see more

PS: If you're reading this, scroll up 4 posts and drop me some feed

 

motion, the first and last are dopee!
love the blackletters

new book - cover page - FATE BLACK BOOK is wat it sayss

and the sketch before it was finished

 

xyk i think the thicker leeters look better but with the driping background, make the drips parallel if u know what i mean. Mass the T is sick and the k on baak

 

its book
haha but thanks
i think my B is weak any tips any1

 

Bumpity before bed.

Mass - I think your letters are pretty damn dope, a very advanced level. CHoice of fill could have been better, stronger colors (all the colors seem kinda dull/mellow) i.e. instead of pink you could have used a red/orange for more contrast. Not much other crits i can give you.

 

thanks man, yea i kinda did that while listenin to jazz, so like i was in a pretty chill mood
ill crack out sometin more intense tomorr

 

your letters are hot but im not feeling the arrow extensions maybe keep a couple and change some up?

 

The Sheep..stop biting Fezat ...and when you actually want to battle ( cos you pussied out last time ) ... give me a call ! ..

Shameeee....hmmm...es niyceee...but one letter as usual !//do a god damn peice !!

hey..

ZOF...coming along is an ill style keep it up !!!!



some freestyle i did again in an exam when i finished

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woot woot !

crities ! :d

 

bump for amkwah since i havnt seen him online

and there he was!

 

zero:loose the addons
xyk:feeling it whats the middle letter
skip:not into the first but i digg the second two specialling the botton one
mas$:fresssshhhhh <3
amk:fresh as always

 

mas- thats dope im feelin that
fresko- nice simple keep it up
hunting- not feelin the shin and try 2 make it more simple