Tango piece, part of a poster i made for dance class... [Broken External Image]:http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/5928/tango127ke4.jpg a few days old now, wish i didnt add all the yellow lines, i was trying to cover up the pen beneath. ivew been workin with this piece since that purple and yellow one.... thinkin i might whip out pencil and eraser soon [Broken External Image]:http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/421/marcieeeeeo0.jpg
Amaze: you know i like your style a lot but i dont think those extensions are workin with your piece. its kinda like i cant do regular ones on my weird style. its not a bad piece i just think you should work with different ones. keep it up though bud REvid: nice blockbuster fill is pretty ill ha but i know your inking abilities and you could have done better on the 3d lines and if your rocking a multicolor fill you should have some fade in the 3d. (just saying cause your skilled at coloring man ) also on the piece you did at school, the O's are highlighted on both sides but whatever that throw is still sexy. that new G is lookin good. Sanr: im not feelin all the letters connecting at the top man maybe seperate them next time but other than that looking good. Smoothnuts: im feelin that simple from you man good work. The End: nice real clean soo here some ish i did at school with only markers i had i need to work on G's
fuckin starting this, suggestions? colours? etc. rank - lookin dope, on the last blue one maybe try making the loop on the n a bit smaller, meh my opinion
[Broken External Image]:http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/7254/steyrmcgeeok8.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/7771/steyrmcgeecolorpn0.jpg ok, i forgot to get pics pf my simples=[, ill post them after school. crits please no haters.
pros: I like your S...i really dig your colors, graphics, fill, bubbles, dots, 3d all of that!! cons: i hate when people say this to me but yea block your letters (work on letters) i think even you must know the E is pretty bad.
Crits: mind.or.matter- Go basic..just simple letters...I'm really not feeling it at all. the end- I'm actually liking the yellow in the background. Rank-oner!- You've got some nice pieces there...What's wrong with your G..I think it looks rather good. steyr- work with your block letters before attempting that style. It'll help you out. View attachment 337496 Just wanted to try a different word..I keep getting stuck at the O in about..lol
[Broken External Image]:http://img250.imageshack.us/img250/3065/01160822161yz7.th.jpg I just drew that shit up in mathclass with a black marker. Kinda whack but whatever.
^^ simples, make your letters uniform and simple before you tweak them twist, bring the A closer to the O? like the form tho would look cool with more blackletter styles in it also i see a bit of Faith47 in it, not a bite just reminds me of her
Word, I mean I just fnished it like seriously a few minutes ago. I didnt pay that much mind to the uniformity of the letters either cause I was just sketching it out. Im planning on actually putting that up on a wall soon. Anyway, thanks for the crits and whatnot.
u kno ive noticed, noone crits this dude..i love ur style man, cant read it for shit but its nice n clean, u wanna exchange? ive got shames one done, gna post up later..just pencil tho cas of school
i feel bad for whoever is gonna have to look at that. seriously dont even bother wasting your paint, give it awhile till you get your simples down to the point u can do them with your eyes closed. mas$- no one crits the dude because he dont give crits
you aint the only one so it dont matter, the tbb thread was complete shit awhile back but its gettin better now.
Looks like you're biting Rosy One a bit here: View attachment 337501 View attachment 337502 View attachment 337503 View attachment 337504 It's funny how the Y the R and the S are the best letters.You even bit her fill style with the little spots of light.
damn thats a pretty hard bite but seriously you kids need to learn to give crits instead of just posting up your shit and expecting people to say anything.