Serv: That shit looks tight. Maybe move the R a little closer to the E.

I took the advice I got from this topic and played around with it a little, and I think my handstyle got slightly better.
Check it.
Again, crits, comments, tips, etc. are greatly appreciated, cuz I have one of the worst handstyles in this topic.

 

bump that shitt cause i gave mad crit and got NONE.
Serv- Take the Random line off your E and separate the exclamation from the V.

*edit*
Ark - the pic is too small to make anything out, but from the looks of it your letters are a bit too sharp.. your quotes are to big and high up.

 

something for my friend.

i put a watermark on it b/c i know he tries to claim my shit, people told me. haha claim this

 

BUMP

Sen,I really like the flow and stuff, tablet or ball mouse.

 

i like it man, the top one looks like it has a gradient.

 

used a Pilot Gold Marker, looks amazing on walls as well.

 

nice graber.

 

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You got some nice flow with your letters.. The only thing i would change is the "A" on the end on the last one, or is that a 1?

 

not sure about the extension on the E with the top one.
Does this have more flow?

 

me and tezm

 

Its a 1. I dont really know what to do with it to bring some more to the right side of it. it looks wierd to just cut it off, almost too boxy

thrice - Lose the C crossing though the H, thats madd gay.

Cin123 - dont like the symetrical one... Tezm's lasttag is whack.. but the other two are pretty sweet.

 

nah cin i like the symetrical one, seems nice and original. keep it up

 

Hey well just cut it off and post another pic and we shall see what people say about it. how about that??

 

Big ups to every one on this page.

 

some ones i did the other night...
you cant see the "n" on this one, couldnt get far enough back to take the pic
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just a quickie, had cars coming towards me so had to be fast
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Thanks for the crits, 7th. Just so ya know, if you click the pic it'll get bigger.

@fonone: I'm not feelin' the K in the first pic. Looks too much like an R. Also, the C in the first pic is a lil' squished, which makes it look like an A. Looks pretty good other than that.

 

ahh the C is an I haha, i just didnt but the dot on top, thanks for the crits though ill have to look out for that

tech i like that handstyle, flows good but maybe change the A from going to a point to beng more like an upside down U with the middle bar? might suite the rest of the letters better? idk worth a try

 

Oh, I gotcha. I guess if you toned down the extension from the I to the R, it wouldn't look like a C as much.

 

Little dif A, prisma is drying out too

Rek- I like the second R without the beginning extension though

Cin- I like the second one in yellow more then the symmetrical ones. though the C should have more of a gap i think.