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the E is the only letter that works for me
i mean the right, zig-zagged bar of the R tucks under the straighter left foot of the R - i feel that if should kick out to the right a bit more...
decent crit man thanks alot
i'll give a few more crits:
HEIR - I really like the overall flow of the piece - especially in the top of the I - there really nice curves and...
can i get a real crit on this... i gave 6
if you want crits then give them out too... unless you're real toy
yo man if you want some real crits then you should go away and practise it 100 times before you post one. the guy is only giving you a bad crit...
safeway - cant really read anything apart from S at the end which is nice but for me personaly i cant really crit it
CPAM - dont really like this...
i think your shit would look 10x better if you used a thinner outlining pen
sike and seid hench shit love both of your stuff
does this deserve intermediate status? if not ill go back to the toy thread with it:
snaw - make your bars the same width - if you find it hard tape 2 pencils together or something. good to see your doing simples tho
sate - i...
Take - thanks for your advice, ill take it into consideration
soak - in your first sketch the colours are pretty distracting from the actual...
fair point but my structure is based from a core understanding of bars and the structure of letters. some others may agree with me when i say...
OTFL i really like this
going simple was a great move - the fade is sweet
only thing is that O - its kind of irregular and the square additions...
Huuuge simple. sick
rasek just looking over my missed posts and you need a bump
this style is PHUCKING NICE
toys (including myself) look and learn
yarbles sick throwies just get your had even smoother and it will b perf
dare sort out drop shadow and smoother style
mine plz crit:
sank ill exchange u wna do it? i write zema btw
i know, im still working on my lettering! i just try and pass on the good advice people give me
gcrolla- You need to construct letters from bars... also with your 3d / drop shadow just magine every point on your letter but just down and left...
PandaJerk- try to tone down your 3d and get ur letter structure sorted, the E isnt very symmetrical, the letters are a little cramped and the A...
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