Menu

Welcome!

By registering with us, you'll be able to discuss, share and private message with other members of our community.

Blackbooks

Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

Share This Page

  1. d_g

    d_g Elite Member

    • Messages: 1,211
    • Likes Received: 3
    The 'y' looks a little to similar to a 'z' IMO.
     
  2. tycoonin

    tycoonin Senior Member

    • Messages: 211
    • Likes Received: 0
    yea i whould suggest changing the y a little cus it definitly rezembles a z
     
  3. doomsayer

    doomsayer Elite Member

    • Messages: 750
    • Likes Received: 0
    Haha I thought it was a Z.
     
  4. bouncingsoul

    bouncingsoul Elite Member

    • Messages: 1,242
    • Likes Received: 0
    This thread aint leet no more... Oh well, revised throwie... I changed the H from lowercase to a capital H

    View attachment 215944

    :edit: Just realized the 3d's a little screwed up in some places but I jut want critz on the actual throw
     
  5. Zire

    Zire Senior Member

    • Messages: 340
    • Likes Received: 1
    Its really annoyning when u just post ur own work but dont crit anyone, its mostly newbies who do tht.
     
  6. d_g

    d_g Elite Member

    • Messages: 1,211
    • Likes Received: 3
    ^^^ Yeah but if you're having trouble getting your own shit sorted you're probably not in the position to say what's wrong with others.
     
  7. doomsayer

    doomsayer Elite Member

    • Messages: 750
    • Likes Received: 0
    if u just started ur not gunna know what looks good or how to crit work anyways

    soul that looks alot betta than b4, cept on the last letter, what is that pointy thing on the top, its like a straight line? hahah sorry mate im getting u mixed up wit sumone else, anyway the trowie look aight just that striahg line things confusin, make it a bit thickr ior w/e
     
  8. Zire

    Zire Senior Member

    • Messages: 340
    • Likes Received: 1
    Well theres no harm in making comments, anyways how u sposed to know how to improve if evryone is 'not good enough' to crit or comment. We are in the toy forum so if we lived by tht rule then no one here wud comment.
     
  9. d_g

    d_g Elite Member

    • Messages: 1,211
    • Likes Received: 3
  10. Krash

    Krash Senior Member

    • Messages: 156
    • Likes Received: 0
    Bizzump. [/b][/quote]
    i'd say work on keeping your lines smoother
     
  11. bouncingsoul

    bouncingsoul Elite Member

    • Messages: 1,242
    • Likes Received: 0
    I dunno, I used to give people critz and stuff a while ago but people used to not take it good so I stopped... If you guys really want me to voice my opinions I will, just don't take it in a bad way... And that pointy thing was supposed to be like angry eyes in place of the hole in the e... In that example they were kinda squished so yeah...

    Just so this post isn't completely useless...

    View attachment 215959

    I REALLY liked how this one turned out... I'll add 3d and all that stuff soon
     
  12. uhhh

    uhhh Elite Member

    • Messages: 1,618
    • Likes Received: 2
    ohhhh damn. i really like your stuff. your characs moe but your letters are most defienetly getting there. keep it upp
     
  13. bouncingsoul

    bouncingsoul Elite Member

    • Messages: 1,242
    • Likes Received: 0
    Honestly, my characters are dead simple, but thanks anyway
     
  14. jerm_mtl

    jerm_mtl Senior Member

    • Messages: 400
    • Likes Received: 0
    Bizzump. [/b][/quote]
    i dont like ur letters
     
  15. beone

    beone Elite Member

    • Messages: 503
    • Likes Received: 0
    fuck paper and fuck not having paint and fuckin not having people to paint with

    can i get some critsh i know the top of the s is to big, im defenatly gunna work on this
    [Broken External Image]:http://img1.yoxio.com/img/250889.jpg
     
  16. Krash

    Krash Senior Member

    • Messages: 156
    • Likes Received: 0
    make the them...rounder.practice drawing circles for a few minutes as a warm up excercise,and your circular parts will look rounder.try to give the letters more distinction as well :)
     
  17. nerdx

    nerdx Elite Member

    • Messages: 1,421
    • Likes Received: 0
    does that say regs?
     
  18. beone

    beone Elite Member

    • Messages: 503
    • Likes Received: 0
  19. N.O.T.E

    N.O.T.E Senior Member

    • Messages: 147
    • Likes Received: 0
  20. Krash

    Krash Senior Member

    • Messages: 156
    • Likes Received: 0
    first resize.its eazy.click edit on your pic.when in paint,press ctrl+w,then put in like 30 an 30.from what i can make out:take off tha bits.don't connect the letters....an work on your 3-d