some stuff ive been drawing, did this in schiool today, any stand outs? any crits? View attachment 216336 View attachment 216337
[Broken External Image]:http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/6870/image002qn6.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/8064/image006nu6.jpg Sketches i did today. Not overly happy with them. Crits anyway
bouncingsoul: it deffinetely has potential keep sketching man. sekz: top one lookz pretty good, bottom i dont like the way the S is made out of 2 parts and i dont like the way the top right of the z conects with the K, it doesnt looks very natural it just looks some like rare bar coming out from it. i also think there are a few to many add ons around the letters. im deffinetly feeling that E on the first and the second. keep sketching man.
Honestly the throws are shit. The shading in the dead letter sketch (last flick) was well done though
Haha no problem. Just define the letters more. Like I couldn't even tell what they said until I saw the last one
just finnished this then... for the toy battle. like i said in the battle thread i shouldnt of put the orange line through it. also i think the O is pretty average but besides that im happy. crits please guys cheers matt edit: usually a pic helps... [Broken External Image]:http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/3569/hpim2109jm0.jpg
Its good but the orange line is real distracting, it takes my eye of the actuall peice and i just follow the line haha.
my battle entry any critz befor i colour it up. and skeam the last E is a bit squigle if you no what i mean! and next time take a picktur befor you try orange lines and stuff. [Broken External Image]:http://img50.imageshack.us/img50/7659/dsc01890dk1.jpg