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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. nephs ike201

    nephs ike201 Member

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    loose the little pointson the tops of the letters....other than that...shit looks aight
     
  2. DoMiNo

    DoMiNo Member

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    user posted image

    Comments and criticism without sarcasm please! biggrin.gif

    if u in NYC.. u would have to change ur name cuz there is already a SCR out here.. just trying to tell u before u get all nice and shyt and den get into sum beef and have to change becuz of ur name
     
  3. pace1

    pace1 Senior Member

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    truth-no dont lose the points just make them come straight to the left of the letters.
     
  4. myl

    myl Elite Member

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    yeah the points look cool
     
  5. NICCSACC

    NICCSACC Banned

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    MYL, feels very sky but its good

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    shits dope!
     
  6. weldo

    weldo Senior Member

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  8. myl

    myl Elite Member

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    hot shit man
     
  9. NICCSACC

    NICCSACC Banned

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  10. doomsayer

    doomsayer Elite Member

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    ok, i, trying to develop a peice, i tryed really hard to keep my letters structured, i think it turned out ok, but what do you think... worth working on or should i just start from simpleness again crits appreciated.

    View attachment 219733
     
  11. DeathRow

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  12. myl

    myl Elite Member

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    the letter structure is poor...its just wack in general, id say continue doing block/straight letters till you get the feel of how the letters flow
     
  13. funky monky

    funky monky Senior Member

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    who the fuck did i bite <_<
     
  14. alive

    alive Banned

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    truth-go simpler. ur coming along, but dont u da re try to connect your letters yet! or rock them so hard. work on keeping your letters strokes the same width. the next step will be adding more curves.

    deathrow- u really need to take it simple. stop connecting, extending, arrowing, and i have a good feeling, biting. go back to basics. not blocks, but straight letters.


    anyway thanks for my crits to those who gave. heres another sketch of it, pen freestyle with red sharpie fill. more crits would make my day! (ran outta room for the Z, wasnt rele thinking what i started it)

    ai55.photobucket.com_albums_g121_coercethemasses_DSC02639.jpg

    btw, can some1 better then me, tell me what i should be working on in particular? or how i can make my letters work together more? thanks soooo much.

    peace.
     
  15. *~ANZIO~*

    *~ANZIO~* Elite Member

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    use that style for the pherz battle, i like it
     
  16. funky monky

    funky monky Senior Member

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    yeah man taht style is pretty dope jsut dont put as much arrows and ur set
     
  17. bouncingsoul

    bouncingsoul Elite Member

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    The S is sick, but I'm not really likin' the E. Make the middle two bars squished together so it has that same kinda feel as the S

    :edit: weldo- They're sick, but I don't like your N's at all
     
  18. pace1

    pace1 Senior Member

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    doom- the first t is good th second should be cleaned up . the R shouldnt have that line through it on the right leg. loose the conections to the r and others. no extention on the U and make the thickness of the U smaller and the smae witdh as the t

    alive- make the widths all the same...just thicken up the P and no line through the R on the right leg. and redue int pencil and then color to make it clean. but for a pen freestyle its pretty good. also try and make the letters fit together more.
     
  19. sky 5

    sky 5 Elite Member

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    MYL, feels very sky but its good

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    bump for magic nyc . .

    myl - nice "se" sketch . . .you aint bitin my style .. you just did a classic semi-wildstyle that half the writers on the planet do . . . nice job, good use of the extensions to eat up some of the open sapce without havin them distract/take away/or cover up the letter flow . ..push that style hard and you should see some real progress soon . . . i use addons to take up unwanted empty space and if im lookin to reinforce my flow . . . i like how all your arrow extensions shoot horizontal (i do that alot), it gives good contrast/flow to the dominant vertical lines of the letters . . .

    weldo - dopeness man . . .i hope you stick around and drop some more . . .
     
  20. Fosale!

    Fosale! Elite Member

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    Got bored on vacation so i did pen freestyle rollers/blockbusters for random people and one piece
    Pesk
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    Gerk-messed up on the R
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    Sec/Ebk
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    I did one for Cezr but i cant find it and I tried a Evex one but I couldn't get a good V or X
    Piece
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